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6/23/2005 c1 Rosa Myaa
in my opinion this story was very well written. i could picture the characters and the actions with what they were doing at each point in time. however, i think there should be a bit mor dialouge in the first chapter and decribe each character for the newbies. also, even though to story is focusing on Raven and Shadow, perhaps use the other characters a little more. But the story is interesting and they are very new ideas and quite original. over all i give it around four stars. congrats Shadow
4/10/2005 c3 2Kissa123
Good chapter! Cant wait till the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
4/10/2005 c3 2im in a kill people mood
I still laugh every time you put princess Raven. Update!
4/7/2005 c3 ultimsaiyan
I like where this is going and am intrested to read more.. Hurry up you :P you know who this is. happy i finally reviewed? lol
3/16/2005 c2 2Kissa123
WOW this sounds really pritty good! Cant wiat to read the next chapter! Plez post soon!
2/23/2005 c2 22Esprit D'escalier
I am not even gonna try to read, but I will give you a offer, how would you like an editor?
1/23/2005 c1 3Mystic Water Goddess
YOUR STORY SUCKS MONKEY BUTT!
1/23/2005 c1 darkspie
nice im at the edge of my seat man kep it coming
1/23/2005 c1 kagura Look-alike
I've said this a million times Raven is a half demon!
1/23/2005 c1 1stumblesun
its nice, really, i like. not like any other fan fics at all! alittle spelling error, but not much. please update!
1/23/2005 c1 3Sasuke16raven
o_O wow! cool! awsome! what happened? please tell me! soon! (lol) update soon

the-lost-raven
1/23/2005 c1 3darkaurora333
Interesting...yet you gave us a cliffhanger *begins sobbing* WHY MUST YOU BE SO CRUEL! *sniff* I'll be ok anyways please update I leave thee with a quote:

Never argue with an idiot they just drag you down to their level and beat you with experience...thank you *vanishes*
1/23/2005 c1 2im in a kill people mood
it a good 1st chapter.i've just posted mi first fanfic 2.it's called cassie.i'll read yours if you read mine.you could try pressing enter after a few sentences or your fanfic becomes hard to read.anyways cool story so far
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