for Creme de Menthe7/6/2007 c1 shaithis1
Well done indeed. It takes talent to write a fic about such an action packed and comical series without having to rely on a situation that strongly features either of these elements, and yet still be able to have it come off souding like it is actually the characters from the show.
Well done indeed. It takes talent to write a fic about such an action packed and comical series without having to rely on a situation that strongly features either of these elements, and yet still be able to have it come off souding like it is actually the characters from the show.
3/7/2007 c1 
4Maxwell's Daemon
I know I'm late to the party, but beautifully done. There's little I can say that hasn't been covered below.
"In the movies, the British ones always have a flask of gin or Scotch hidden on them, the Americans have Jack Daniel's, and the Russians have vodka..."
I guess Helmajistan doesn't have its own national liquor.
4Maxwell's DaemonI know I'm late to the party, but beautifully done. There's little I can say that hasn't been covered below.
"In the movies, the British ones always have a flask of gin or Scotch hidden on them, the Americans have Jack Daniel's, and the Russians have vodka..."
I guess Helmajistan doesn't have its own national liquor.
10/28/2006 c1 fasterassembly
A very charming FMP! fic. The characterization is on the nose (where does that expression even come from?) and the tone matches well with the canon. Also, the IRA mix up-hahaha, that was hilarious.
Keep writing.
A very charming FMP! fic. The characterization is on the nose (where does that expression even come from?) and the tone matches well with the canon. Also, the IRA mix up-hahaha, that was hilarious.
Keep writing.
5/30/2006 c1 1openwindow2
AWESOME STORY! i especially liked the part about the russians...hahhaahahahah!
1openwindow2AWESOME STORY! i especially liked the part about the russians...hahhaahahahah!
12/23/2005 c1 bongo queen
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
12/23/2005 c1 bongo queen
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
12/23/2005 c1 bongo queen
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
12/23/2005 c1 bongo queen
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
very sweet, just like their drinks! I hopw you write more, no body ever writes Soussuke and Kaname fics...really if its not plasterd all over tv like inuyasha, it's not worth writing about.
6/5/2005 c1 11Fabulist
“You are an irritant agent,”
hahahahaha, great line!
Great overall actually. I love your characterization of both Kaname and Sousuke, it seems perfectly plausible for this to be right out of the anime. The dialogue is great, Sousuke having a rope line on the roof is great, and I actually believe Kaname would drink, even though I never would have thought so otherwise. I'm very impressed, great job!
11Fabulist“You are an irritant agent,”
hahahahaha, great line!
Great overall actually. I love your characterization of both Kaname and Sousuke, it seems perfectly plausible for this to be right out of the anime. The dialogue is great, Sousuke having a rope line on the roof is great, and I actually believe Kaname would drink, even though I never would have thought so otherwise. I'm very impressed, great job!
6/4/2005 c1 Cristina
This was a delightful story. I never tried Creme de Menthe but only can imagine on how it taste. You got me wondering. If Creme de Menthe is Kaname's favorite drink. What is Sousuke's favorite drink?
This was a delightful story. I never tried Creme de Menthe but only can imagine on how it taste. You got me wondering. If Creme de Menthe is Kaname's favorite drink. What is Sousuke's favorite drink?