for Forest Spirits3/27/2005 c6 
4medlii
Very nice! I love all the mystery and such. Your writing totally rocks, I know I've said it before but you are very descriptive, but not so descriptive that it takes away from the story. You are awesome at keeping everyone in character, too. There was only one weird thing. You said (about the glowing trees) "Not all of them, she realized dimly. Just the ones they could see." How would she know that the trees they couldn't see weren't glowing?
Anyways, this chapter rocked. The mysterious kid with the black and white eyes was pretty cool too. He/She adds a lot of suspense and mystery to the whole story. Please keep writing, I heart your stories!
4medliiVery nice! I love all the mystery and such. Your writing totally rocks, I know I've said it before but you are very descriptive, but not so descriptive that it takes away from the story. You are awesome at keeping everyone in character, too. There was only one weird thing. You said (about the glowing trees) "Not all of them, she realized dimly. Just the ones they could see." How would she know that the trees they couldn't see weren't glowing?
Anyways, this chapter rocked. The mysterious kid with the black and white eyes was pretty cool too. He/She adds a lot of suspense and mystery to the whole story. Please keep writing, I heart your stories!
3/17/2005 c5 medlii
ooh, it's getting good! I love this story and I can't believe other people aren't reviewing it! I'm pretty sure Sesshomaru's dragon's name is Aun, if you didn't know that.
Anyways, this story rocks and I can't wait for more. You are an excellent storyteller and your writing is very precise. I can practically picture the scenes in my head. I can't wait to find out what happens next, you have me on the edge of my seat!
ooh, it's getting good! I love this story and I can't believe other people aren't reviewing it! I'm pretty sure Sesshomaru's dragon's name is Aun, if you didn't know that.
Anyways, this story rocks and I can't wait for more. You are an excellent storyteller and your writing is very precise. I can practically picture the scenes in my head. I can't wait to find out what happens next, you have me on the edge of my seat!
3/14/2005 c4 medlii
That was awesome! That was one great argument and you did a great job of keeping everyone in character. I liked how you worked Shippo in at the end, too. Keep writing!
That was awesome! That was one great argument and you did a great job of keeping everyone in character. I liked how you worked Shippo in at the end, too. Keep writing!
3/12/2005 c3 medlii
I can't wait to find out what comes next, you are great at writing cliff hangers even if you aren't doing it on purpose. And I know Kagome and Sango's plan is gonna be good. Your chapters are just the right length, too- not too short and not too long. The whole Shippo provoking Inuyasha was hilarious. Actually, most of this chapter was pretty funny. Keep up the awesome writing!
I can't wait to find out what comes next, you are great at writing cliff hangers even if you aren't doing it on purpose. And I know Kagome and Sango's plan is gonna be good. Your chapters are just the right length, too- not too short and not too long. The whole Shippo provoking Inuyasha was hilarious. Actually, most of this chapter was pretty funny. Keep up the awesome writing!
3/12/2005 c2 medlii
This chapter was great! Your writing is so descriptive that I can picture the the scenes in my mind. You are awesome at keeping everyone in character too. I can't wait for more to happen, this story looks like it's gonna be great!
This chapter was great! Your writing is so descriptive that I can picture the the scenes in my mind. You are awesome at keeping everyone in character too. I can't wait for more to happen, this story looks like it's gonna be great!
3/12/2005 c1 medlii
Oh, interesting. Keitaro sounds a bit like Legolas to me (do I get any cookies?). Poor Miroku and Inuyasha are jealous! It'll be good for them though ;) Keep writing this, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh, interesting. Keitaro sounds a bit like Legolas to me (do I get any cookies?). Poor Miroku and Inuyasha are jealous! It'll be good for them though ;) Keep writing this, I can't wait to see what happens next!
3/11/2005 c1 6Eleature
Um... huh?
I really can't see where you're going with this, but it seems interesting. You've hidden your plot deeply it seems, or maybe you just didn't want ot reveal it in the first chapter.
I really like the tension you've described between Miroku and Inuyasha, and Keitaro. It's in character and really funny since I can totally see both of them getting miffed if 'their girls' offer attention to anyone else.
lol. Keep up the good work.
6EleatureUm... huh?
I really can't see where you're going with this, but it seems interesting. You've hidden your plot deeply it seems, or maybe you just didn't want ot reveal it in the first chapter.
I really like the tension you've described between Miroku and Inuyasha, and Keitaro. It's in character and really funny since I can totally see both of them getting miffed if 'their girls' offer attention to anyone else.
lol. Keep up the good work.