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11/20/2005 c1 4Goofy Edward
Lol. I liked your story. ^_^ It makes a lot of sense and ppl should actually apply what they have learned in situations like that. *huggles smart Hisoka*
3/4/2005 c1 Jyaki
wow... i also get board in computer class to, but i just sit around and do nothing, but u actuly do work, this is better than what i could do, great job ^^
2/20/2005 c1 2Haruna-San
Thanks. *sweatdrops* If I ever get bored in computer class again, (which is very likely by the way.) I'll work on that! And yes, I am aware that I am reviewing my own story. *sweatdrop* I'm weird...
2/19/2005 c1 1Arin Rowan
(just sort of blinks and sweatdrops) yes... very weird...but creative. Deranged, but creative. You'll fit in fine at have a good writing style, but you might want to add more details to your manner of writing. It seems a bit abrubt- sort of cut off a bit short. Or to easier explain it, you seem to have the exact opposite problem of being long-winded. Good luck.

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