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5/23/2006 c2 4Araknia the Storyspinner
Dot... dot... dot... you guys are crazy O.o (twitch twitch). Tari, have Kal explain that to you. BTW, "Is everybody ready" is a question, not an explaination (I couldn't resist that one). I'm at the library bored out of my mind right now, so forgive my abruptness. BTW, your characters swear as much as I do. Just an FYI, that's not exactly a good thing. Oh well!

-The Great and Mighty STORYSPINNER
3/1/2005 c1 Tari
HIYA! its moi, Becca...I finally got around to reading this...aren't you proud? tis a wondrous story...update! and I didn't know that there were DARKINGS in Trickster's Queen...must hunt that down...LEAF! I wuv leaf...*coughs*
2/25/2005 c1 Araknia the Storyspinner
Disgusting. I'm crazy, but that ending was disgusting. Rated R at the least. Please change, Kal.

2/8/2005 c1 3LATMC
Yes, you should update! I liked it; it was different from other stories I read.
2/5/2005 c1 Queen of the Insects
...That was really weird. You have typos, and need to make it all in one tense. And it seems that for the ending talent show you just copied and pasted. Um, it's intersting but I don't really like the mentioning of the full names, and the tie between the two girls for _third_ place. Tis also weird how fast Kal and Eric progress in their relationship. But I do like it. So happy cheese.

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