for Forever After11/15/2011 c1 
11jumpOVERtheMOON
I have to admitt, this short one-shot was filled with alot of emotion. I felt like I was watching people have a conversation; not reading it on fanfiction. Keep up the good work and keep writing! =)
11jumpOVERtheMOONI have to admitt, this short one-shot was filled with alot of emotion. I felt like I was watching people have a conversation; not reading it on fanfiction. Keep up the good work and keep writing! =)
11/25/2008 c1 34wprosser2008
Such a sad ending, but so cute. You just HAVE to feel sorry for Dawn.
All in all, a great fic.
maschan
34wprosser2008Such a sad ending, but so cute. You just HAVE to feel sorry for Dawn.
All in all, a great fic.
maschan
10/23/2006 c1 30MrBillyD
This was very good, you got it just right. If you want to continue the narrative, who knows how many things you can do with it?
30MrBillyDThis was very good, you got it just right. If you want to continue the narrative, who knows how many things you can do with it?
9/7/2006 c1 5God Is A DJ
I love the ending. I feel horrible for Dawn. She went through so much to get her mom back...and she didn't remember Dawn at all.
5God Is A DJI love the ending. I feel horrible for Dawn. She went through so much to get her mom back...and she didn't remember Dawn at all.
1/8/2006 c1 4final-fantasy-20
Oh, this is great! If you have not done so already, a sequel would be lovley to read. Poor Dawn!
4final-fantasy-20Oh, this is great! If you have not done so already, a sequel would be lovley to read. Poor Dawn!