for Electric Fun10/5/2006 c1 devin
it's a bit short, but it looks to be pretty good. I personally don't watch stargate, but from i read, it sounds pretty interesting.
it's a bit short, but it looks to be pretty good. I personally don't watch stargate, but from i read, it sounds pretty interesting.
9/5/2006 c5 
2Kiltiana
you know...it's longer, cool, and awesomely Snakish! Hee hee..I'm hyper..so Idon't make any sense...whatsoever...anywho keep it up, Moli Rhene Harper...*smiles at you* See ya Snake!
~~YMY~~ AKA Otacon!
2Kiltianayou know...it's longer, cool, and awesomely Snakish! Hee hee..I'm hyper..so Idon't make any sense...whatsoever...anywho keep it up, Moli Rhene Harper...*smiles at you* See ya Snake!
~~YMY~~ AKA Otacon!
7/15/2006 c4 36scottiedog
Please keep going! I am interested who put her on the planet with Nitri.
SG-1 will take care of her. Good Job!
36scottiedogPlease keep going! I am interested who put her on the planet with Nitri.
SG-1 will take care of her. Good Job!
6/12/2006 c3 2HellsAngel44
Well done. I liked this chapter alot. Keep up the great work and hope to see another chapter soon.
= )
2HellsAngel44Well done. I liked this chapter alot. Keep up the great work and hope to see another chapter soon.
= )
3/1/2006 c3 2Kiltiana
...'cruela' is a big meanie to shomei. and you know...this is getting interesting... hope you review quickly...(what am I talking about...I need to update on my Wolf's Rain...so much to do so little time to do it...hate it, that I do...) UPDATE!
2Kiltiana...'cruela' is a big meanie to shomei. and you know...this is getting interesting... hope you review quickly...(what am I talking about...I need to update on my Wolf's Rain...so much to do so little time to do it...hate it, that I do...) UPDATE!
3/1/2006 c2 Kiltiana
OMFG! You love those cliffies! I'm gonna strangle you, you know...well, keep up the good word, my friend. Best on your journey!
OMFG! You love those cliffies! I'm gonna strangle you, you know...well, keep up the good word, my friend. Best on your journey!
11/11/2005 c2 Eldorado Dingbatti
This is a good start but it could do with being longer. I also didn't like Jack's reaction to the girl being kidnapped-he would be pretty annoyed and fully with Teal'c to go and rescue her, however this is a small point and keep going!
This is a good start but it could do with being longer. I also didn't like Jack's reaction to the girl being kidnapped-he would be pretty annoyed and fully with Teal'c to go and rescue her, however this is a small point and keep going!
11/6/2005 c1 2HellsAngel44
A bit short but you have got me intrested on what is to come. Hope you post a next chapter. Will be waiting to read.
Tip: Maybe in the next chapter you could explain a bit more on the situation with the girl and Nirriti or could even put a part of the girls point of view.
You don't have to but have a think about it. Will read the next chapter and get back to you when it is posted up. : )
2HellsAngel44A bit short but you have got me intrested on what is to come. Hope you post a next chapter. Will be waiting to read.
Tip: Maybe in the next chapter you could explain a bit more on the situation with the girl and Nirriti or could even put a part of the girls point of view.
You don't have to but have a think about it. Will read the next chapter and get back to you when it is posted up. : )