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4FGHermione
The story was great, but despite being a firm H/G shipper, I'd rather Harry and Ginny don't get back together. Harry was an absolute jerk and no amount of grovelling can change that.
I think you captured the chracters' emotions perfectly! Kudos
4FGHermioneThe story was great, but despite being a firm H/G shipper, I'd rather Harry and Ginny don't get back together. Harry was an absolute jerk and no amount of grovelling can change that.
I think you captured the chracters' emotions perfectly! Kudos
9/29/2020 c3 Not good ending
Firstly, I would say that the story at beginning and middle are decent. Although I hate it, because I love H/H. The ending was rushed. You just sort of made a huge contrast with Ginny. One point never forgiving him. Then after Harry said a few things, ‘poof’ Ginny is beginning to forgive him. I’m a little disappointed at the end
Firstly, I would say that the story at beginning and middle are decent. Although I hate it, because I love H/H. The ending was rushed. You just sort of made a huge contrast with Ginny. One point never forgiving him. Then after Harry said a few things, ‘poof’ Ginny is beginning to forgive him. I’m a little disappointed at the end
5/15/2017 c3 2Isaacl112
Hmm. Pretty short compared to how long and good you could make it. Maybe an ending where they get back together?
2Isaacl112Hmm. Pretty short compared to how long and good you could make it. Maybe an ending where they get back together?
7/18/2015 c1 Guest
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5/25/2011 c3 No Name
What? NOOOO! Awwwww, that was so emotional but I can't believe it just ended like that! It doesn't seem to be completed, like in music the piece just ends in the middle without a complete end or a song in the middle of a verse. Still, a beautiful story nonetheless.
What? NOOOO! Awwwww, that was so emotional but I can't believe it just ended like that! It doesn't seem to be completed, like in music the piece just ends in the middle without a complete end or a song in the middle of a verse. Still, a beautiful story nonetheless.
5/25/2011 c2 No Name
NOOOOOO! BUT YAYYY! She should have waited a little while until letting him near Lizzy. Personally, I think Ginny's character after raising the baby alone would have resisted for a little while. Then, he could have shown his determination and maybe there could have been like a cute moment where he shows up to surprise them and finds their daughter and makes a connection with her. I think she would have let Harry near her after seeing that...
LOL! I'm rambling now! Great chapter, although short (hint, hint).
NOOOOOO! BUT YAYYY! She should have waited a little while until letting him near Lizzy. Personally, I think Ginny's character after raising the baby alone would have resisted for a little while. Then, he could have shown his determination and maybe there could have been like a cute moment where he shows up to surprise them and finds their daughter and makes a connection with her. I think she would have let Harry near her after seeing that...
LOL! I'm rambling now! Great chapter, although short (hint, hint).
5/25/2011 c1 No Name
Ohhh, really liked this beginning! Kind of subtle at first, but then you begin to understand what she's talking about. Great writing, except minor grammar mistakes like, "me and Elizabeth" etc. Can't wait to read on!
Ohhh, really liked this beginning! Kind of subtle at first, but then you begin to understand what she's talking about. Great writing, except minor grammar mistakes like, "me and Elizabeth" etc. Can't wait to read on!
9/20/2007 c3 Loyd1957
Wow! Why doesn't anyone finish a story. I find out that they are written years ago. I keep getting involved in great stories and then they have no end.
Are you even considering finishing? You have a great story line going and you write with such emotion that you draw the reader in.
I really like it.
Wow! Why doesn't anyone finish a story. I find out that they are written years ago. I keep getting involved in great stories and then they have no end.
Are you even considering finishing? You have a great story line going and you write with such emotion that you draw the reader in.
I really like it.
5/14/2005 c3 14Rianna Potter
Thank goodness, not another he-left-her-and-comes-back-years-later fic! Great stuff! :D
14Rianna PotterThank goodness, not another he-left-her-and-comes-back-years-later fic! Great stuff! :D
4/26/2005 c3 Dellarouge
ok i like your writing but this story is so anoying and frustrating. You didnt build the charcter, you threw them into a story and placed them into situations that they werent ready for. A story, especially one like this, needs to show a certain amount of growth, this didnt. Ginny went from one decision to the next without much hesitation and there was only a generalised idea of her life now and the people involved. With harry there was again only a generalised version of his life at present, there didnt seem to be any depth. Why would harry suddenly start caring about his daughter in a split second when for a long time he really couldnt give a shit? if you expanded on your work you would have a fantastic story,at the moment your just skimming the surface.
ok i like your writing but this story is so anoying and frustrating. You didnt build the charcter, you threw them into a story and placed them into situations that they werent ready for. A story, especially one like this, needs to show a certain amount of growth, this didnt. Ginny went from one decision to the next without much hesitation and there was only a generalised idea of her life now and the people involved. With harry there was again only a generalised version of his life at present, there didnt seem to be any depth. Why would harry suddenly start caring about his daughter in a split second when for a long time he really couldnt give a shit? if you expanded on your work you would have a fantastic story,at the moment your just skimming the surface.
4/26/2005 c2 Dellarouge
ok...every child does need a father but i think ginny could have put up a bit more of a fight, she sounded too accpeting to trustworthy.
ok...every child does need a father but i think ginny could have put up a bit more of a fight, she sounded too accpeting to trustworthy.
3/31/2005 c3 19Rubber-duckiesofdoom
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! This is SUCH a great story, and I would love to see what happens.
**Duckies
19Rubber-duckiesofdoomPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! This is SUCH a great story, and I would love to see what happens.
**Duckies
3/21/2005 c3 6Misshogwarts1125
It's very cute. I think for an ending you should have Lizzy grow up living with seperate parents (like joint custidy) and then have her walk out on one of them.
6Misshogwarts1125It's very cute. I think for an ending you should have Lizzy grow up living with seperate parents (like joint custidy) and then have her walk out on one of them.