for The First Awakening8/23/2012 c10 
35anjumstar
Okay, that last part didn't make sense at all. It was a cute story, though I feel it was long winded for the small amount of plot that was actually in it. And May seemed out of character the whole time. I've always seen her as more of a pushover than anything else. Not so mad like you showed her as.
I think that it's a really interesting idea to have Misty working at Wallace's gym. I really liked that, and Team Rocket's job was kind of cute too. I liked to story, it just needed a little work.
35anjumstarOkay, that last part didn't make sense at all. It was a cute story, though I feel it was long winded for the small amount of plot that was actually in it. And May seemed out of character the whole time. I've always seen her as more of a pushover than anything else. Not so mad like you showed her as.
I think that it's a really interesting idea to have Misty working at Wallace's gym. I really liked that, and Team Rocket's job was kind of cute too. I liked to story, it just needed a little work.
9/26/2011 c9 turle
Good job Togetic! I can't believe it evolved and that Jessie and James didn't know where Ash was being kept.
Good job Togetic! I can't believe it evolved and that Jessie and James didn't know where Ash was being kept.
9/26/2011 c8 turle
Finally, Togepi is back with its real trainer. All is right with the world again. Now it's time to see what Togepi is made of.
Finally, Togepi is back with its real trainer. All is right with the world again. Now it's time to see what Togepi is made of.
9/26/2011 c5 turle
The tooth fairy? That's who they ran into! Finally,hopefully Togepi will be returned to Misty! Wallace is a dead man.
The tooth fairy? That's who they ran into! Finally,hopefully Togepi will be returned to Misty! Wallace is a dead man.
9/26/2011 c4 turle
I should have known that's what May said to Brock. Well, Ash missed her a whole lot more than I thought.
I should have known that's what May said to Brock. Well, Ash missed her a whole lot more than I thought.
5/12/2007 c10 9Esperon Hearts
Gah Your reputation that preceeds you does nothing for you! You're an even better writer than I've heard! I'm also on serebiiforums and you're mentioned a lot round there...This has got to be one of the BEST fics i've read recently and I love it to pieces! Now...where are those sequels...
9Esperon HeartsGah Your reputation that preceeds you does nothing for you! You're an even better writer than I've heard! I'm also on serebiiforums and you're mentioned a lot round there...This has got to be one of the BEST fics i've read recently and I love it to pieces! Now...where are those sequels...
1/28/2006 c10 23wolf-girl87
Wow, you so lost me on the last parts. =.= But, hey, YOU! Continue this fic... NOW! Thankies. Ja matta ne!
As Always,
wolf-girl87
23wolf-girl87Wow, you so lost me on the last parts. =.= But, hey, YOU! Continue this fic... NOW! Thankies. Ja matta ne!
As Always,
wolf-girl87