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8/1/2006 c7 2J.R. Writer
This was one of my favorite chapters. As it has been said before, you have great descriptions of violence.

One bit of constructive critisism though; maybe look to improve your character development a little bit(besides Dwayne and Big D) because I dont feel very concerned for any of the characters besides those mentioned above.

For example, I didnt really feel the death last chapter, and I did not care about the well being of Sent.

Still very good though & I look forward to reading more chapters soon.
7/24/2006 c1 4ProphIt
Nice, very nice. I like how descriptive you are when it comes to action. I tend to rush through those kinds of scenes, because I see no way to do it thoroughly without being able to see it .. Ah, well. Update.
7/8/2006 c6 2J.R. Writer
this is great ... definately update!
3/12/2005 c1 Mad Oli
great story

please update soon
3/6/2005 c2 7lordmasterkris
Nice story, please don't stop writing. You are very descriptive and you know how to describe an action scene. I will be wating for an update, so please continue when you get time.

Also, you might get more feedback if you accept anonymous reviews.

If you have time, check out my fanfics, and tell me what you think.

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