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1/8/2017 c30 Guest
There's too much going on. Most of your Japanese spelling is wrong. Your paragraph spacing needs help.
9/18/2009 c30 3Miralith
Love the story it was awesome! I hope that you do make a sequel!
1/16/2007 c1 4Serenity Dinago
ok
7/25/2006 c30 Mrs. Sesshomaru
luv it. luv it. luv it! sequel?
12/27/2005 c12 lizzy
well um again, Kagome seems really bitchy, because, Inuyasha didn't do anything! Kagome was the one who didn't love him anymore first, so i think she hurt him more than he hurt her, all he did was kill her, not torture her by letting her know that he doesn't love her, so yeah, i think Kagome's being overdramatic, and isn't Kagome supposed to be forgiving? but again, that's the only part i don't like, otherwise your story is good.
12/27/2005 c9 lizzy
umm, no offense, but in like,, chappie 8, you kida portray Kagome as a bitch. like she only told Inuyasha that she loved him to save her own life. i like your story and all, but yeah, that's like, the only part i don't really like.
12/4/2005 c21 1deviltrickster
Some spelling mistakes.It's still good, but... ehem... WHY IS SHIPPO IN THE HOT SPRING WITH RIN? Gah! that's just... WRONG!

Yay Inuyasha died. I'm not a hater but he kinda deserved it after he killed her and tried to kill her again.

keep writing
12/2/2005 c11 deviltrickster
WOW! thats dry!"retarded nicknames" ? that's sad
12/2/2005 c9 deviltrickster
WOW! ALL THESE FOREIGN WORDS I DON'T KNOW! WOAH! The room is spinning!
12/2/2005 c8 deviltrickster
Whar is the meaning of onegai and Gomen-nasai? you're Japanese, no?
12/2/2005 c6 deviltrickster
LOVE IT!

Yeah that would be funny ifhe went into the bathroom and she let out a BIG, STINKY fart. Imagine what his face wouuld look like. HA HA.

Dude that's funny .
12/2/2005 c5 deviltrickster
It's a bit OOC but its still good. Keep writing.
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