for The Prince's First Love1/8/2017 c30 Guest
There's too much going on. Most of your Japanese spelling is wrong. Your paragraph spacing needs help.
There's too much going on. Most of your Japanese spelling is wrong. Your paragraph spacing needs help.
7/25/2006 c30 Mrs. Sesshomaru
luv it. luv it. luv it! sequel?
luv it. luv it. luv it! sequel?
12/27/2005 c12 lizzy
well um again, Kagome seems really bitchy, because, Inuyasha didn't do anything! Kagome was the one who didn't love him anymore first, so i think she hurt him more than he hurt her, all he did was kill her, not torture her by letting her know that he doesn't love her, so yeah, i think Kagome's being overdramatic, and isn't Kagome supposed to be forgiving? but again, that's the only part i don't like, otherwise your story is good.
well um again, Kagome seems really bitchy, because, Inuyasha didn't do anything! Kagome was the one who didn't love him anymore first, so i think she hurt him more than he hurt her, all he did was kill her, not torture her by letting her know that he doesn't love her, so yeah, i think Kagome's being overdramatic, and isn't Kagome supposed to be forgiving? but again, that's the only part i don't like, otherwise your story is good.
12/27/2005 c9 lizzy
umm, no offense, but in like,, chappie 8, you kida portray Kagome as a bitch. like she only told Inuyasha that she loved him to save her own life. i like your story and all, but yeah, that's like, the only part i don't really like.
umm, no offense, but in like,, chappie 8, you kida portray Kagome as a bitch. like she only told Inuyasha that she loved him to save her own life. i like your story and all, but yeah, that's like, the only part i don't really like.
12/4/2005 c21 
1deviltrickster
Some spelling mistakes.It's still good, but... ehem... WHY IS SHIPPO IN THE HOT SPRING WITH RIN? Gah! that's just... WRONG!
Yay Inuyasha died. I'm not a hater but he kinda deserved it after he killed her and tried to kill her again.
keep writing
1deviltricksterSome spelling mistakes.It's still good, but... ehem... WHY IS SHIPPO IN THE HOT SPRING WITH RIN? Gah! that's just... WRONG!
Yay Inuyasha died. I'm not a hater but he kinda deserved it after he killed her and tried to kill her again.
keep writing
12/2/2005 c6 deviltrickster
LOVE IT!
Yeah that would be funny ifhe went into the bathroom and she let out a BIG, STINKY fart. Imagine what his face wouuld look like. HA HA.
Dude that's funny .
LOVE IT!
Yeah that would be funny ifhe went into the bathroom and she let out a BIG, STINKY fart. Imagine what his face wouuld look like. HA HA.
Dude that's funny .
12/2/2005 c5 deviltrickster
It's a bit OOC but its still good. Keep writing.
It's a bit OOC but its still good. Keep writing.