for Mr Monk and the New Assistant3/15/2005 c9 
16Monkish Otaku
Hey! Just wanna leave a quickie review.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you have in store with the case!
16Monkish OtakuHey! Just wanna leave a quickie review.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you have in store with the case!
3/15/2005 c1 SassafrasT
I think you're very good. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are great. It makes me want to read Mr. Monk and the Suicide. Keep up the good work.
I think you're very good. Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are great. It makes me want to read Mr. Monk and the Suicide. Keep up the good work.
3/12/2005 c8 1laalaalaa
hey!
I really really liked your story. it is very nicely written and although i `m still looking for sharona ffs i enjoyed reading your story and couldn`t stop.
keep up the good work :)
1laalaalaahey!
I really really liked your story. it is very nicely written and although i `m still looking for sharona ffs i enjoyed reading your story and couldn`t stop.
keep up the good work :)
3/11/2005 c7 160zzilly14
Hmm... very very interesting. This is a great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
160zzilly14Hmm... very very interesting. This is a great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
3/11/2005 c6 zzilly14
Poor Monk! But I know he'll, just in time, solve the case and prove everyone else wrong! Great chapter!
Poor Monk! But I know he'll, just in time, solve the case and prove everyone else wrong! Great chapter!
3/11/2005 c5 zzilly14
Phooey on Stottlemeyer for not believing Monk! LoL! Good chapter. And yay for Natalie :)
Phooey on Stottlemeyer for not believing Monk! LoL! Good chapter. And yay for Natalie :)
3/11/2005 c3 zzilly14
Interesting chapter!
"The hurt is written all over his face, which is really close to mine right now, and his dark eyes take on this pleading puppy-dog look of distress, and indecision. He is using the puppy-dog face on me?"
Aww! I love how Monk started to pick up the carrots. :)
Interesting chapter!
"The hurt is written all over his face, which is really close to mine right now, and his dark eyes take on this pleading puppy-dog look of distress, and indecision. He is using the puppy-dog face on me?"
Aww! I love how Monk started to pick up the carrots. :)
3/11/2005 c2 zzilly14
Good second chapter! I like the addition of the scene with the car (and the coins, hehe). Natalie's voice is still really good.
Good second chapter! I like the addition of the scene with the car (and the coins, hehe). Natalie's voice is still really good.
3/11/2005 c1 zzilly14
Good Natalie POV.
"He told me to stop gambling, that I would lose everything if I continued. I obeyed. I gave up gambling for good, eventually leaving Las Vegas with him"
That seemed too quick. Why would Nat, after just meeting Mitch, instantly give up? Some time should pass, a relationship should form, before quitting her gambling.
Other than that, I like this chapter and her opinion of Monk: "there is definitely something wrong with him." LoL!
Good Natalie POV.
"He told me to stop gambling, that I would lose everything if I continued. I obeyed. I gave up gambling for good, eventually leaving Las Vegas with him"
That seemed too quick. Why would Nat, after just meeting Mitch, instantly give up? Some time should pass, a relationship should form, before quitting her gambling.
Other than that, I like this chapter and her opinion of Monk: "there is definitely something wrong with him." LoL!
3/6/2005 c5 2lady rosebit
wow...your portrail of the captain makes him sound like a jerk. None the less, please continue.
2lady rosebitwow...your portrail of the captain makes him sound like a jerk. None the less, please continue.
3/5/2005 c4 lady rosebit
of course he was murdered. nah, good so far. After you finish this one can you PLEASE write a scene about tommy? That was the CUTEST monk episode I'd ever seen in my life, and I really would like to hear about natalie's point of view.
of course he was murdered. nah, good so far. After you finish this one can you PLEASE write a scene about tommy? That was the CUTEST monk episode I'd ever seen in my life, and I really would like to hear about natalie's point of view.
3/5/2005 c4 7camerabugs
Please keep writing! You are doing a wonderful job. You have captured the characters perfectly. I cannot wait to see what will happen next.
7camerabugsPlease keep writing! You are doing a wonderful job. You have captured the characters perfectly. I cannot wait to see what will happen next.