for Rosemary Alive?3/25/2006 c6 
3Detective Jazz Dever
Nice ending, even if it left some things unclear. Anyway, you really capture Lois Lowry's writing style. Nice job. :D
3Detective Jazz DeverNice ending, even if it left some things unclear. Anyway, you really capture Lois Lowry's writing style. Nice job. :D
3/25/2006 c5 Detective Jazz Dever
Oh, that was cute, with him and Carla. But what did Rosemary do? I mean, she's obviously clever if she could think of how to trick the camera. And plus, since the Giver looked away before she injected herself, he couldn't possibly be able to see what happened, even if he looked very carefully. Wait, just one thing; I'm not sure if that stuff in the needles was actually poison, or if it was, it was some of the strongest stuff ever. I mean, it caused pain for the little baby, more than a needle should, so I think it made of something else. But that's just what I think. *shrugs*
Oh, that was cute, with him and Carla. But what did Rosemary do? I mean, she's obviously clever if she could think of how to trick the camera. And plus, since the Giver looked away before she injected herself, he couldn't possibly be able to see what happened, even if he looked very carefully. Wait, just one thing; I'm not sure if that stuff in the needles was actually poison, or if it was, it was some of the strongest stuff ever. I mean, it caused pain for the little baby, more than a needle should, so I think it made of something else. But that's just what I think. *shrugs*
3/25/2006 c4 Detective Jazz Dever
Nice. I never thought of that possibility, but I like it. Anyway, yes, of course I'm dying to know! And you want to know something funny? When I first read it, when Jonas and that elderly woman(I forgot her name) were talking about Roberto's release, I began to suspect that it meant death, but I brushed it away from my mind; it was too horrible, but when that baby got killed, I cried like a little baby, screaming "I knew it! This is just too horrible". Anyway, sorry for the rant. I'll continue reading now.
Nice. I never thought of that possibility, but I like it. Anyway, yes, of course I'm dying to know! And you want to know something funny? When I first read it, when Jonas and that elderly woman(I forgot her name) were talking about Roberto's release, I began to suspect that it meant death, but I brushed it away from my mind; it was too horrible, but when that baby got killed, I cried like a little baby, screaming "I knew it! This is just too horrible". Anyway, sorry for the rant. I'll continue reading now.
12/26/2005 c6 Fragglemuppet
Hellow,
That was a great story! I have been reading stories here for a long time, and this was one of the best I've seen! Only one suggestion though, now that you have it finished, it might be a good idea if you marked the story as "complete." This will make it easier for readers who are looking for full stories to read. Once again, congradulations on a great one!
Hellow,
That was a great story! I have been reading stories here for a long time, and this was one of the best I've seen! Only one suggestion though, now that you have it finished, it might be a good idea if you marked the story as "complete." This will make it easier for readers who are looking for full stories to read. Once again, congradulations on a great one!
9/28/2005 c6 2Rendia
Wait, why did people not like Rosemary?
Good other than that, but it left that question hanging in my head, and whether Jonas would be treated the same way. Or would he help her to gain acceptance?
2RendiaWait, why did people not like Rosemary?
Good other than that, but it left that question hanging in my head, and whether Jonas would be treated the same way. Or would he help her to gain acceptance?
9/22/2005 c1 Emzy
Hi... I have read ur other story andsoI was looking at ur pro.and I see this 1about The Giver...wow...we justdid likeallofthis stuff on this book and soo its like really weird... but I haven'tgot a chance to read it but it seems really cool!
Hi... I have read ur other story andsoI was looking at ur pro.and I see this 1about The Giver...wow...we justdid likeallofthis stuff on this book and soo its like really weird... but I haven'tgot a chance to read it but it seems really cool!
8/29/2005 c6 Iica
Yes. Definately liked it. :) Way to go!
Yes. Definately liked it. :) Way to go!
6/3/2005 c6 PatronSaintOfSwitchbladeFights
'liked it'! lets try LOVED IT! this story is awsum!i like this ending a lot better than the books... oly 1 thing... y is she not wanted?
sapphirestargaxur @ hotmail . com
take out the spaces, and u have my email! plz explain why she isn't wanted and why going to her house would be a punishment.
-kikyo evatueit
'liked it'! lets try LOVED IT! this story is awsum!i like this ending a lot better than the books... oly 1 thing... y is she not wanted?
sapphirestargaxur @ hotmail . com
take out the spaces, and u have my email! plz explain why she isn't wanted and why going to her house would be a punishment.
-kikyo evatueit
6/3/2005 c5 PatronSaintOfSwitchbladeFights
YAY! NOT A CLIFFIE! UR NOT EVIL! YAY!
neways... i agree with jonas the giver woult've been proud!
^_^
-kikyo
YAY! NOT A CLIFFIE! UR NOT EVIL! YAY!
neways... i agree with jonas the giver woult've been proud!
^_^
-kikyo
6/3/2005 c4 PatronSaintOfSwitchbladeFights
O.O
really? she saw it FIRST HAND!
HOLY CRAPOLIES!and it was a friend too!and i don't like cliff-hangers! ur evil... EVIL! (jk!)
O.O
really? she saw it FIRST HAND!
HOLY CRAPOLIES!and it was a friend too!and i don't like cliff-hangers! ur evil... EVIL! (jk!)
6/3/2005 c3 PatronSaintOfSwitchbladeFights
she didn't guess that! why would he want to escape if HE didn't have that deeper meaning 4 life aswell?well, im going on now... another cliffie...
-kikyo evatueit
she didn't guess that! why would he want to escape if HE didn't have that deeper meaning 4 life aswell?well, im going on now... another cliffie...
-kikyo evatueit
6/3/2005 c2 PatronSaintOfSwitchbladeFights
... it's not? wow! she must've gone through a LOT! well, im gonna hury up to the next chappie... kinduva cliffie...
... it's not? wow! she must've gone through a LOT! well, im gonna hury up to the next chappie... kinduva cliffie...