for You Can't Fight Your Destiny2/20/2006 c6 
3RoryAceLoganHuntzbergerFan
I really like this story...
first... what if Logan only agreed to date the ex because his parents set him up with her.
secondly what if Logan never had really gotten over Rory so that the breakup doesn't really hurt him because seeing Rory again has made him realize the one he can't let get away again.
3RoryAceLoganHuntzbergerFanI really like this story...
first... what if Logan only agreed to date the ex because his parents set him up with her.
secondly what if Logan never had really gotten over Rory so that the breakup doesn't really hurt him because seeing Rory again has made him realize the one he can't let get away again.
4/21/2005 c6 31r'n'rb
good good great great awesome awesome excelent excelent UPDATE but maybe a lttle longer chapters cause its like yay and then i finish and its all sad however i shouldn't be one to talk cause my chapters r so short well theres goes my lifes history lalalalla continue ( ps i'm very hyper rite now ) lalala
31r'n'rbgood good great great awesome awesome excelent excelent UPDATE but maybe a lttle longer chapters cause its like yay and then i finish and its all sad however i shouldn't be one to talk cause my chapters r so short well theres goes my lifes history lalalalla continue ( ps i'm very hyper rite now ) lalala
4/21/2005 c5 14BSManthaLUV
I changed my mind :( I'm facing major writers block with this story. Its ending at chapter six, the end.
14BSManthaLUVI changed my mind :( I'm facing major writers block with this story. Its ending at chapter six, the end.
4/20/2005 c7 25Kiwiflea
for some reason, the plot just doesn't gel together. I'd say try to make everyone a little more in character and everything a little less rushed.
25Kiwifleafor some reason, the plot just doesn't gel together. I'd say try to make everyone a little more in character and everything a little less rushed.
4/10/2005 c6 146absurdvampmuse
Hey,
Now this chapter was much better than the last chapter. Your descriptions were indeed better and so was the dialogue. I actually enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Bye, smile :-)
146absurdvampmuseHey,
Now this chapter was much better than the last chapter. Your descriptions were indeed better and so was the dialogue. I actually enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Bye, smile :-)
4/9/2005 c6 stargirl112593
I liked the story and u shuld continue with the story! And make a lot more chapters i love this story!
I liked the story and u shuld continue with the story! And make a lot more chapters i love this story!
4/8/2005 c6 14BSManthaLUV
At this point I'm pretty sure I'm gonna continue this story. I'm not sure I like the idea of it ending... so I'm gonna keep writing it but not for to many more chapters, I hate neverending stories.
14BSManthaLUVAt this point I'm pretty sure I'm gonna continue this story. I'm not sure I like the idea of it ending... so I'm gonna keep writing it but not for to many more chapters, I hate neverending stories.
4/8/2005 c6 TVAddict90
heyy i really love this story please update soon ps fluff is good as long as it includes rory and logan
heyy i really love this story please update soon ps fluff is good as long as it includes rory and logan
4/5/2005 c5 146absurdvampmuse
Hey,
This was a pretty good chapter, interesting, too and it definitely had its moments, though your way of writing still needs some work, especially your descriptions; you have to take your time on them to fully work them all out. For instance: She didn’t stop either, just BAM she slammed right into him. And CRASH down she went so did he. You could have wrote something like: And she didn't stop; she kept walking until she ran into him, taking him down with her as she fell. You know, a bit more subtle to keep it interesting. Just some friendly advice.
Bye, smile :-)
Bye, smile :-)
146absurdvampmuseHey,
This was a pretty good chapter, interesting, too and it definitely had its moments, though your way of writing still needs some work, especially your descriptions; you have to take your time on them to fully work them all out. For instance: She didn’t stop either, just BAM she slammed right into him. And CRASH down she went so did he. You could have wrote something like: And she didn't stop; she kept walking until she ran into him, taking him down with her as she fell. You know, a bit more subtle to keep it interesting. Just some friendly advice.
Bye, smile :-)
Bye, smile :-)