for Damaged Little Doll10/19/2014 c7 
2Lucyole
please write further on it that would be great your stroy sound very interesting and
dramatic really good please please please write again on it.
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2Lucyoleplease write further on it that would be great your stroy sound very interesting and
dramatic really good please please please write again on it.
cookies for you*
3/14/2006 c7 DeLa Lune
This is REALLY REALLY good! PLease update soon, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chpater.
This is REALLY REALLY good! PLease update soon, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chpater.
12/10/2005 c7 2Michelle1Lauren
Holy Man! This story is tremendous! Its so good that as a read the last chapter, I repeatedly checked the scroll bar to see if I was near the end or not. I'm very confident that your update will be as good as your last.
2Michelle1LaurenHoly Man! This story is tremendous! Its so good that as a read the last chapter, I repeatedly checked the scroll bar to see if I was near the end or not. I'm very confident that your update will be as good as your last.
12/4/2005 c7 Fallen Dragon
ah. Makes me kinda sad that Serena was attacked like that. Oh well lol. Update soon plz! I really enjoy your ficcie!
ah. Makes me kinda sad that Serena was attacked like that. Oh well lol. Update soon plz! I really enjoy your ficcie!
12/1/2005 c7 Silver Moon Lit Goddess
Not bad. A little confusing to begin with... but what is a story with out a good twist to be revealed later on in the story hey? Gotta keep us interested some how... The last part however made sense of why she was found they way she was. Lord Voldemort is using Serena like he used the Unicorns in the first book, there may be more to it, but that is the basic gist, anyway, look forward to the next update
Not bad. A little confusing to begin with... but what is a story with out a good twist to be revealed later on in the story hey? Gotta keep us interested some how... The last part however made sense of why she was found they way she was. Lord Voldemort is using Serena like he used the Unicorns in the first book, there may be more to it, but that is the basic gist, anyway, look forward to the next update
11/30/2005 c7 13sapphire11224
No, why didn't you update anymore? What caused Serena to forget everything and what the heck is Voldermort planning? Update soon
13sapphire11224No, why didn't you update anymore? What caused Serena to forget everything and what the heck is Voldermort planning? Update soon