for After the Storm5/5/2008 c4 
15suburbantimewaster
I have to say that I really hope you continue this story. I've just read it, and I can't stop crying.
15suburbantimewasterI have to say that I really hope you continue this story. I've just read it, and I can't stop crying.
6/18/2006 c4 7Hannahbb21
This was asmome. It made me cry really hard. My onnly complaint was the whole Karen and Grace thing seemed realy random and out of place.
7Hannahbb21This was asmome. It made me cry really hard. My onnly complaint was the whole Karen and Grace thing seemed realy random and out of place.
7/17/2005 c4 Elyse
Oh my God, I love, I love, I love! You're an amazing writer. At first I was afraid that it would be too dark and depressing for me, but with the right mix of good memory flashbacks it was more than enjoyable. I especially love chapter three, with the almost sex scene (it was really hot, I felt very naughty just reading it; and that's coming from someone that read gay erotic novels on a regular basis); and the Karen visit (you seriously had me crying, and no fanfiction has ever been able to do that to me before). I really love it, definatly a favorite, keep writing.
Oh my God, I love, I love, I love! You're an amazing writer. At first I was afraid that it would be too dark and depressing for me, but with the right mix of good memory flashbacks it was more than enjoyable. I especially love chapter three, with the almost sex scene (it was really hot, I felt very naughty just reading it; and that's coming from someone that read gay erotic novels on a regular basis); and the Karen visit (you seriously had me crying, and no fanfiction has ever been able to do that to me before). I really love it, definatly a favorite, keep writing.
6/6/2005 c2 1tangentgirl
omg! only your stories can make me actually cry! its ridiculous! i was actually sobbing...irrate breathing and all...i still have tears running down my cheeks
1tangentgirlomg! only your stories can make me actually cry! its ridiculous! i was actually sobbing...irrate breathing and all...i still have tears running down my cheeks
5/16/2005 c4 23MirrorKisses
This is so good, I wish you didn't stop writing this. It's so...perfect. -Sigh- wonderful writing
23MirrorKissesThis is so good, I wish you didn't stop writing this. It's so...perfect. -Sigh- wonderful writing
4/20/2005 c1 2JustJena
Hey i like it and its a good idea but i think you need to write will more like himself. I think he's being to brutal. i think he's more sensitive even though hes in such pain. i do like it so far though
2JustJenaHey i like it and its a good idea but i think you need to write will more like himself. I think he's being to brutal. i think he's more sensitive even though hes in such pain. i do like it so far though
4/7/2005 c4 5Sundown
aw. Gets me every time! The order of events, the happy times, the angst...such a great combo all rolled into one. Poor Will! My God! please keep goin hun :)
5Sundownaw. Gets me every time! The order of events, the happy times, the angst...such a great combo all rolled into one. Poor Will! My God! please keep goin hun :)
3/23/2005 c3 Sundown
Wow. That's pretty heavy dude. its still really sad...Poor Karen and Will :(. You KNOW that I am a fan of your writing style ... keep it up buddy!
Wow. That's pretty heavy dude. its still really sad...Poor Karen and Will :(. You KNOW that I am a fan of your writing style ... keep it up buddy!
3/22/2005 c3 8keL-rebecca
aww..At least Will's being nice to Jack in your story. I hate it when that lawyer's always insulting my Jack.. Hehe. :) Please update.
8keL-rebeccaaww..At least Will's being nice to Jack in your story. I hate it when that lawyer's always insulting my Jack.. Hehe. :) Please update.
3/21/2005 c2 5Sundown
I know i have reviewed this on another site, but I will review it once again here. its so sad, but I love how Will still talks to Jack - i think that is awesome - and especially Jacks quip about 'reality tv'. really good - keep writing!
5SundownI know i have reviewed this on another site, but I will review it once again here. its so sad, but I love how Will still talks to Jack - i think that is awesome - and especially Jacks quip about 'reality tv'. really good - keep writing!
3/11/2005 c1 Guest
whoa... this is purely deep and awesome... i'm so glad for once there is an angst centered around will. please continue...
whoa... this is purely deep and awesome... i'm so glad for once there is an angst centered around will. please continue...