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2/9/2013 c1 3cmopatrick
Very good short. Strong character development in the short time we know her; you give us a good sense of the tension and emotion that her character feels. Nicely done.
3/12/2005 c1 6AidanPryde
Well done. You did an excellent job developing Sarah as a character that readers can understand. Look forward to seeing more of your work. You wouldn't happen to be from Tuscon, AZ would you?
3/12/2005 c1 23RougeBaron
I know it's very disheartening to receive no reviews when you've put your heart and soul on a story, so let me be the first to comment.

This is an amazing piece. Your gripe on a sniper's role is very alive, as if I saw everything from Sarah's point of view. Very good work! I am eagerly waiting to see more of this story.

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