for how do you feel about that?10/13/2005 c1 
13annieca
Okay last paragraph, ya got confused with your to's. They both should be to not too. Confusing huh? Love the Adam thing behind a curtain...coolio idea.
Have a great day!
Ann
13anniecaOkay last paragraph, ya got confused with your to's. They both should be to not too. Confusing huh? Love the Adam thing behind a curtain...coolio idea.
Have a great day!
Ann
10/11/2005 c3 107TJ-TeeJay
Well, you do still have readers, so don't worry. :o)
I kinda like the setup of making Adam jealous, but I don't really get how Adam could say to Joan that they're still young and that they should be with other people. That sounds so unlike Adam. Or maybe I'm still thinking of pre-Bonnie Adam here...
You should also watch your spelling, you have a few your-you're mix ups and imperative is spelled with an 'a' and also Glynis should be spelled that way. Other than that, I'm still interested in the storyline, please continue!
-TeeJay
107TJ-TeeJayWell, you do still have readers, so don't worry. :o)
I kinda like the setup of making Adam jealous, but I don't really get how Adam could say to Joan that they're still young and that they should be with other people. That sounds so unlike Adam. Or maybe I'm still thinking of pre-Bonnie Adam here...
You should also watch your spelling, you have a few your-you're mix ups and imperative is spelled with an 'a' and also Glynis should be spelled that way. Other than that, I'm still interested in the storyline, please continue!
-TeeJay