8/5/2007 c8 2black111star
“Stupefy.” She whispered.
i think you shodul have used somethign like "stupify maximus" because stupify is supposed to onyl shoot at one right?
and is there s sequal yet? i havnt fninshed the 7th book so i cant search fanfiction wihtout hitting ome fanfics based upon it.
send me a link if the sequal is otu yet. pleasE?
“Stupefy.” She whispered.
i think you shodul have used somethign like "stupify maximus" because stupify is supposed to onyl shoot at one right?
and is there s sequal yet? i havnt fninshed the 7th book so i cant search fanfiction wihtout hitting ome fanfics based upon it.
send me a link if the sequal is otu yet. pleasE?
6/17/2007 c1 malfoyhermionelover
JOIN THE CLUB. im the shortestin my class and im called a shrimp hobbit and Radio Active Squriell(dont ask) but i can pick up ALL OF MY FRIENDS AND THEY R LIKE 80 90 POUNDS AND IM 60! gO SHORT PEOPLE
JOIN THE CLUB. im the shortestin my class and im called a shrimp hobbit and Radio Active Squriell(dont ask) but i can pick up ALL OF MY FRIENDS AND THEY R LIKE 80 90 POUNDS AND IM 60! gO SHORT PEOPLE
3/25/2006 c2 Sheldin
Harry killed Pettigrew in the first chapter, didn't he?
Harry killed Pettigrew in the first chapter, didn't he?
12/12/2005 c8 me
update soon
update soon
8/20/2005 c8 2notavailible
Well all I can say is that some of your story could use a bit of work. If you'd had Ginny slowly falling for Tom's charms and given better reasons for it maybe your story would be a bit more believable. If you want to understand about what I mean about the whole working her into it think I reccommend that you read You Belong To Me by Kitty D1 . It's not done but if you read what she's has so far you'll understand what I mean and it could help you improve a bit. I know that it's your story so if you want Ginny to just be instantly in love with him then that's your choice. Another question. Why would Voldemort give his son the very name that he had resented all his life? And why would he let his wife call him that? Well I'm off to read your sequel story. Hopefully some questions will be answered and things will begin to fall into place.
Well all I can say is that some of your story could use a bit of work. If you'd had Ginny slowly falling for Tom's charms and given better reasons for it maybe your story would be a bit more believable. If you want to understand about what I mean about the whole working her into it think I reccommend that you read You Belong To Me by Kitty D1 . It's not done but if you read what she's has so far you'll understand what I mean and it could help you improve a bit. I know that it's your story so if you want Ginny to just be instantly in love with him then that's your choice. Another question. Why would Voldemort give his son the very name that he had resented all his life? And why would he let his wife call him that? Well I'm off to read your sequel story. Hopefully some questions will be answered and things will begin to fall into place.
8/20/2005 c6 notavailible
umm... well I know that it's just a fanfic but Krissie couldn't very well just tell Voldemort about Grimmauld place because well she'd have to be it's secret keeper for it to matter other wise there would be absolutely no point in going there... But whatever it's your story. Well on to the next chappy!
umm... well I know that it's just a fanfic but Krissie couldn't very well just tell Voldemort about Grimmauld place because well she'd have to be it's secret keeper for it to matter other wise there would be absolutely no point in going there... But whatever it's your story. Well on to the next chappy!
8/20/2005 c2 notavailible
I've only read chapters 1 and 2 so far. It's good but I dunno, why did Ginny give in so easily? Love potion is the only answer that my mind can provide. And the main reason that I started reading your story was cause in the description it said complete and I've just gotten so tired of waiting and waiting and waiting for the author to post the next chapter! Well you said the next chappy's better so I hope that means I'll get a bit more of a plausable explination for how Ginny went from hating Tom to loving him at the snap of a finger.
I've only read chapters 1 and 2 so far. It's good but I dunno, why did Ginny give in so easily? Love potion is the only answer that my mind can provide. And the main reason that I started reading your story was cause in the description it said complete and I've just gotten so tired of waiting and waiting and waiting for the author to post the next chapter! Well you said the next chappy's better so I hope that means I'll get a bit more of a plausable explination for how Ginny went from hating Tom to loving him at the snap of a finger.
6/7/2005 c1 5Jay FicLover
I have a challenge for all Ginny/Tom or Ginny/Voldemort lovers!
How about this:
"Ginny is sixteen now, and to everyone's dispair she's deathly sick with leukemia. She only has six months left to live, months that she already knows that she'll soon live in complete pain, due to her mortal sickness. What happens when she is taken by a certain Dark Lord under this circumstances? How will the Dark Lord react to a prisoner that doesn't fear pain or death cause she knows she's already their doomed victim, without Voldemort's assistance? ...Will he be merciful and let her go back home to die surrounded by her loved ones, or will he force her to stay the last of her time alive by his side? Or what'd be more incredible, will he even try to heal her with his magic?"
RULES:
1) The story can be either Voldemort/Ginny, Tom/Ginny, or even Harry/Ginny (in the last case, both the Dark Lord and the Boy-Who-Lived set their minds on the very same thing: save Ginny's life; they may become temporary allies or each try to do it on his own)
2) You decide if Ginny ever returns home or not, if she's ever healed or she dies (in that case, how does that affect Tom/Voldemort?).
It can be a romance/angt/horror/tragedy or whatver you want, guys... It just has to have a great deal of Tom or Voldemort/Ginny interaction, no matter if she ends with him or not.
I have a challenge for all Ginny/Tom or Ginny/Voldemort lovers!
How about this:
"Ginny is sixteen now, and to everyone's dispair she's deathly sick with leukemia. She only has six months left to live, months that she already knows that she'll soon live in complete pain, due to her mortal sickness. What happens when she is taken by a certain Dark Lord under this circumstances? How will the Dark Lord react to a prisoner that doesn't fear pain or death cause she knows she's already their doomed victim, without Voldemort's assistance? ...Will he be merciful and let her go back home to die surrounded by her loved ones, or will he force her to stay the last of her time alive by his side? Or what'd be more incredible, will he even try to heal her with his magic?"
RULES:
1) The story can be either Voldemort/Ginny, Tom/Ginny, or even Harry/Ginny (in the last case, both the Dark Lord and the Boy-Who-Lived set their minds on the very same thing: save Ginny's life; they may become temporary allies or each try to do it on his own)
2) You decide if Ginny ever returns home or not, if she's ever healed or she dies (in that case, how does that affect Tom/Voldemort?).
It can be a romance/angt/horror/tragedy or whatver you want, guys... It just has to have a great deal of Tom or Voldemort/Ginny interaction, no matter if she ends with him or not.