for On the way down3/30/2020 c14 
22Sorcerer's Muse
To be fair, they did announce themselves. But wow, that would definitely lead to a few years in therapy.
22Sorcerer's MuseTo be fair, they did announce themselves. But wow, that would definitely lead to a few years in therapy.
1/26/2019 c16 Hazel
This is fun! Hermione is a riot. Lmao I can't stop laughing at her. Kinda out of character but... She's pregnant so it's plausible.
This is fun! Hermione is a riot. Lmao I can't stop laughing at her. Kinda out of character but... She's pregnant so it's plausible.
10/4/2017 c15 39sbmcneil
I really can't see Harry or Ginny acting like this at all. It's like you switched the couples up. I can't see Hermione being married with children at 24. I think she would want to wait. Harry would want a family as he's never had one. I would think he would be married with children at an earlier age.
39sbmcneilI really can't see Harry or Ginny acting like this at all. It's like you switched the couples up. I can't see Hermione being married with children at 24. I think she would want to wait. Harry would want a family as he's never had one. I would think he would be married with children at an earlier age.
10/4/2017 c12 sbmcneil
I still think she was a bit psychotic. How is two weeks early premature? Sorry, but I didn't think the whole chapter made sense. I did like that they had twins, but I can't see prim and proper Hermione being that vulgar.
I still think she was a bit psychotic. How is two weeks early premature? Sorry, but I didn't think the whole chapter made sense. I did like that they had twins, but I can't see prim and proper Hermione being that vulgar.
10/4/2017 c11 sbmcneil
Hermione is pregnant, not psychotic. I really can't see her acting this crazy.
Hermione is pregnant, not psychotic. I really can't see her acting this crazy.
12/7/2016 c4 crazyblonde
I loved this fic! It was so cute and sad and happy and AHHHHH LILY AND JAMES
The only part I have to criticize is the fact that you put Charlie and Tonks together and that Remus only showed up once. If you're going to bother keeping them both alive you might as well ship them. BUT I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH GOD BLESS
I loved this fic! It was so cute and sad and happy and AHHHHH LILY AND JAMES
The only part I have to criticize is the fact that you put Charlie and Tonks together and that Remus only showed up once. If you're going to bother keeping them both alive you might as well ship them. BUT I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH GOD BLESS
11/17/2015 c16 AnonymousWriter23456
WHOAAA this was amazing and I Liked it very much. Yay. Thank you.
WHOAAA this was amazing and I Liked it very much. Yay. Thank you.