for The Day The Smile Slipped12/27/2023 c3 D
This sucks
This sucks
5/9/2023 c1 
1zSnako
to the guy 19 reviews below me, I just wanna ask you one simple question... who hurt you my guy? it's not that serious bro...
1zSnakoto the guy 19 reviews below me, I just wanna ask you one simple question... who hurt you my guy? it's not that serious bro...
3/31/2023 c2 RAMAN
THATS NOT HOW YOU FUCKING SPELL RAMEN IDIOT
THATS NOT HOW YOU FUCKING SPELL RAMEN IDIOT
5/13/2022 c7 Guest
Nice Story!
Nice Story!
5/13/2022 c2 Guest
Okay Sakura that was a good one
Okay Sakura that was a good one
9/29/2021 c7 Guest
Oh so NOW they pay attention to him when he's quiet
Oh so NOW they pay attention to him when he's quiet
12/14/2020 c6 Guest
I don't like the end . I want everybody beg for excuse for naruto
I don't like the end . I want everybody beg for excuse for naruto
10/16/2020 c6 Guest
MY TEARS ARE REAL
MY TEARS ARE REAL
10/4/2020 c4 anonymous
great story honestly! i love it so much! I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAYED LEE AND GUY SENSEI LIKE I DON’T KNOW IF THERE’S ANYBODY ELSE WHO CAN FIT LEE’S CHARACTER THAT WELL. I LOVE THE WAY YOU MADE THEM TALK!
but anywyays
i really love this fanfic! keep up the amazing work! 3
great story honestly! i love it so much! I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU PORTRAYED LEE AND GUY SENSEI LIKE I DON’T KNOW IF THERE’S ANYBODY ELSE WHO CAN FIT LEE’S CHARACTER THAT WELL. I LOVE THE WAY YOU MADE THEM TALK!
but anywyays
i really love this fanfic! keep up the amazing work! 3
7/17/2020 c7 Bluewarrior3
Hmmm your story was okay. There were some parts i didnt like, like how everyone was just bothering naruto constantly or how hinata just kept following naruto and not doing anything about it, she helped in the end but he had to go through everyone just for her to finally do something. Also the epilogue, you should have just stuck with the second one instead of making two.
Perhaps this story wasnt for me but keep doing you and keep writing, especially if you enjoy it!
Hmmm your story was okay. There were some parts i didnt like, like how everyone was just bothering naruto constantly or how hinata just kept following naruto and not doing anything about it, she helped in the end but he had to go through everyone just for her to finally do something. Also the epilogue, you should have just stuck with the second one instead of making two.
Perhaps this story wasnt for me but keep doing you and keep writing, especially if you enjoy it!
7/17/2020 c1 Bluewarrior3
Hello author! I just read your first chapter but i just wanted to tell you to keep writing no matter what. I mean sometimes i read the reviews and people just talk shit even tho they have the option to leave. Don't get me wrong when i read a bad story i write a review letting them know what i didnt like and that there story wasn't for me, but some people are just plain mean. I hope you dont take there shit to heart because you are your own person and people who talk shit towards you instead of explaing why they didnt like the story are people who have no lives and just want something to get mad about.
Anyways im still reading, i dont know yet if im going to like it or not because its just the first chapter but ill let you know:)
Hello author! I just read your first chapter but i just wanted to tell you to keep writing no matter what. I mean sometimes i read the reviews and people just talk shit even tho they have the option to leave. Don't get me wrong when i read a bad story i write a review letting them know what i didnt like and that there story wasn't for me, but some people are just plain mean. I hope you dont take there shit to heart because you are your own person and people who talk shit towards you instead of explaing why they didnt like the story are people who have no lives and just want something to get mad about.
Anyways im still reading, i dont know yet if im going to like it or not because its just the first chapter but ill let you know:)
4/2/2020 c7 Guest 8
Have Sasuke have a crush on Hinata. lol Have Hinata asked Sasuke bring Naruto back for her.
Have Sasuke have a crush on Hinata. lol Have Hinata asked Sasuke bring Naruto back for her.