for The Day The Smile Slipped12/28/2007 c1 
3shadowzerover5
All i can say is...wow I sincerely believe this one of the finer written fics among I would like to see more of your work in future. Ja Ne!
3shadowzerover5All i can say is...wow I sincerely believe this one of the finer written fics among I would like to see more of your work in future. Ja Ne!
12/14/2007 c7 7black-hurt17
its a really good story, really realistic, many people think it's easy to have a mask, i often admire naruto for his.stupid people sometimes don't take no for an answer
7black-hurt17its a really good story, really realistic, many people think it's easy to have a mask, i often admire naruto for his.stupid people sometimes don't take no for an answer
12/11/2007 c7 AiSard
loved this fic. love the plot and general execution. wished Hinata had a larger role though =p and her 'no more' speech was a tad dramatic but ya, loved it all the same
loved this fic. love the plot and general execution. wished Hinata had a larger role though =p and her 'no more' speech was a tad dramatic but ya, loved it all the same
11/6/2007 c7 4Mama san Saki
aw...I cried in parts of it.
I love this story...no..that's an understatement. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS AROUND! and it's completely changed my opinions about some of the characters! I'm about to fav...DONE!
thanks for writing this!
Oh and please can you review my story...I'm...running a bit short on reviews. *sweatdrop*
4Mama san Sakiaw...I cried in parts of it.
I love this story...no..that's an understatement. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS AROUND! and it's completely changed my opinions about some of the characters! I'm about to fav...DONE!
thanks for writing this!
Oh and please can you review my story...I'm...running a bit short on reviews. *sweatdrop*
11/6/2007 c1 bi-chan
the title would make such a good song title. I'm listening to powder snow by ayumi hamasaki...its so depressing. But i love the story! It's well good! w00t!
the title would make such a good song title. I'm listening to powder snow by ayumi hamasaki...its so depressing. But i love the story! It's well good! w00t!
11/5/2007 c1 3AkitaSagaraAlanya
Yo, I'm sorry but I don't have much time so I can't read your fic and give it a creative rewive, but I am adding it so that I at least can read it later, Ja Ne =)
P.S Please forgive me *boves deply while makin Hinata no poking no jutsu*
3AkitaSagaraAlanyaYo, I'm sorry but I don't have much time so I can't read your fic and give it a creative rewive, but I am adding it so that I at least can read it later, Ja Ne =)
P.S Please forgive me *boves deply while makin Hinata no poking no jutsu*
9/24/2007 c7 UNC2
This was a nice story. Its one of the many things I hope to actually see in the manga.These are just the main three.
1.) Naruto finally snaps on everybody.
2.) Naruto gets a bloodline limit.
3.)Naruto gets with Hinata.
I like the the second ending way better than the first one.
This was a nice story. Its one of the many things I hope to actually see in the manga.These are just the main three.
1.) Naruto finally snaps on everybody.
2.) Naruto gets a bloodline limit.
3.)Naruto gets with Hinata.
I like the the second ending way better than the first one.
9/12/2007 c1 1Mismoree
I love these kinds of storys! either crossovers, timetravels, banisments, or dark cool naruto are my FAVES! This is so cool! Thanks you so much for writing it!
1MismoreeI love these kinds of storys! either crossovers, timetravels, banisments, or dark cool naruto are my FAVES! This is so cool! Thanks you so much for writing it!
7/8/2007 c7 14ILoveFoxes
YAY ! I love this ending ! Hinata-sama dying would have been too sad ! I have a not-so-simple request : COULD YOU PRETTY PLEASE MAKE A SEQUILE ? PLEASE ? ~ cough , cough ~ That is all , fellow writer . I cannot find a flaw .
14ILoveFoxesYAY ! I love this ending ! Hinata-sama dying would have been too sad ! I have a not-so-simple request : COULD YOU PRETTY PLEASE MAKE A SEQUILE ? PLEASE ? ~ cough , cough ~ That is all , fellow writer . I cannot find a flaw .
6/24/2007 c6 2BlackRoseFire
Nice in deep way. Why did Hinata have to die? Liked it pleaes keep up the writing.
2BlackRoseFireNice in deep way. Why did Hinata have to die? Liked it pleaes keep up the writing.