for The Day The Smile Slipped5/13/2005 c3 Unmortem
I love it, I love it, I love it!
I love it, I love it, I love it!
5/12/2005 c3 
2ranma hibiki
*shudder* must remember to not tick naruto off...not sure if lee will get the point though.
humans have a sense of self preservation. as a ninja its still there but just less as you know life as a ninja is dangerous...but gai and lee probably have NONE! or are just that thick headed(probably the hair blocking off air to their brains)
2ranma hibiki*shudder* must remember to not tick naruto off...not sure if lee will get the point though.
humans have a sense of self preservation. as a ninja its still there but just less as you know life as a ninja is dangerous...but gai and lee probably have NONE! or are just that thick headed(probably the hair blocking off air to their brains)
5/12/2005 c3 1Mercsenary
"SHEESH, BETWEEN LEE’S JUMPSUIT SCREAMING ‘I’M GAY!' AND KIBAS SELF CENTEREDNESS KEEPING HIM FROM GETTING A DATE I FEEL LIKE I’M TALKING TO TWO BRICK WALLS”
Very funny
1Mercsenary"SHEESH, BETWEEN LEE’S JUMPSUIT SCREAMING ‘I’M GAY!' AND KIBAS SELF CENTEREDNESS KEEPING HIM FROM GETTING A DATE I FEEL LIKE I’M TALKING TO TWO BRICK WALLS”
Very funny
5/12/2005 c3 5Tsugath
ROFL. Poor Naruto, so whose going to be at the recieving end of his bad mood next? Neji? Maybe Konohamaru?
5TsugathROFL. Poor Naruto, so whose going to be at the recieving end of his bad mood next? Neji? Maybe Konohamaru?
5/12/2005 c3 4th3j3st3rLIV3S
holy shit... this is the best fic i have ever read! u must update this soon!
4th3j3st3rLIV3Sholy shit... this is the best fic i have ever read! u must update this soon!
5/12/2005 c3 9Dragon Man 180
Oh, right in the heart! Naruto doesn't pull his verbal punches. I just hope he doesn't snap and yell at Hinata after she keeps appearing nearby each time he stops.
9Dragon Man 180Oh, right in the heart! Naruto doesn't pull his verbal punches. I just hope he doesn't snap and yell at Hinata after she keeps appearing nearby each time he stops.
5/12/2005 c3 sleepy kitty
o.o
o.o
5/11/2005 c3 RockFox
Way to go Hinata! Hope by the end of the story Naruto and her will get to talk!
Way to go Hinata! Hope by the end of the story Naruto and her will get to talk!
5/11/2005 c3 crakbaby23
im gonna review all of ur stories today Manatheron! and i like this chap! the whole green gay suit was funny
im gonna review all of ur stories today Manatheron! and i like this chap! the whole green gay suit was funny
5/9/2005 c2 hunter anbu
LMFAO! XD
that's great! especially the part with gai (yes, gai) and lee!
LMFAO! XD
that's great! especially the part with gai (yes, gai) and lee!
5/2/2005 c2 3Dragon Noir
well i like it, naruto throwing a tantrum is quite rare and i think he has every rights to do so
besides it would be very fun to see him tells their true truth to all the gennins when they find him, kinda payback for all the crap they give him (except hinata of course)
see ya next chapter (and i really laugh my ass off with sakura and hinata's stunt about gaara and tsunade)
3Dragon Noirwell i like it, naruto throwing a tantrum is quite rare and i think he has every rights to do so
besides it would be very fun to see him tells their true truth to all the gennins when they find him, kinda payback for all the crap they give him (except hinata of course)
see ya next chapter (and i really laugh my ass off with sakura and hinata's stunt about gaara and tsunade)