for The Day The Smile Slipped5/2/2005 c2 099ckr990
poor poor naruto and kiba. ^_^
don't you just LOVE making them suffer? *grins like homicidal maniacal insane person that has recently escaped from the nearby asylum and has committed mass genocide on the mosquito population of the world* i have to say, you've done a great job portraying the conversation between Gai and Lee, the crazy knuckleheads. can't wait until naruto rips off his peers' shoulders and drinks their blood. i'll be keeping an eye out for this one.
poor poor naruto and kiba. ^_^
don't you just LOVE making them suffer? *grins like homicidal maniacal insane person that has recently escaped from the nearby asylum and has committed mass genocide on the mosquito population of the world* i have to say, you've done a great job portraying the conversation between Gai and Lee, the crazy knuckleheads. can't wait until naruto rips off his peers' shoulders and drinks their blood. i'll be keeping an eye out for this one.
4/25/2005 c2 GirlLoki
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE THIS STORY! It's been over a month, and your fantastic fic hasn't even moved! GET ON WITH IT!
thanks.
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE THIS STORY! It's been over a month, and your fantastic fic hasn't even moved! GET ON WITH IT!
thanks.
54/13/2005 c2 randomreader
finally! :D lol someone finally considered "what if naruto just had a bad day and acted out on the stress" story that did NOT include him murdering someone or even THINKING about murdering someone in the first chapter. liking the story, keep it up
finally! :D lol someone finally considered "what if naruto just had a bad day and acted out on the stress" story that did NOT include him murdering someone or even THINKING about murdering someone in the first chapter. liking the story, keep it up
4/12/2005 c2 kakageryuendan
great fic!but awol doesnt mean what i think u thought what it meant. update soon!
great fic!but awol doesnt mean what i think u thought what it meant. update soon!
4/12/2005 c1 kakageryuendan
this fic is one of the best i read in a while...i wonder whats going to happen next.
this fic is one of the best i read in a while...i wonder whats going to happen next.
4/4/2005 c2 Archangel Rhapsody
Ow man I'm laughing so hard, Naruto acts different and everyone freaks. LOL, This is a fantastic story.
Ow man I'm laughing so hard, Naruto acts different and everyone freaks. LOL, This is a fantastic story.
4/1/2005 c2 GirlLoki
Please update soon! Your story is one of the best!
Please update soon! Your story is one of the best!
3/28/2005 c2 Ann
lolz. this fic holds some truth. naruto's mask might be slipping soon. he keeps it all within himself! i love that
"Gaara hooking up with Tsunade-Sama?”
part! it's such a classic!
please update soon! =]
lolz. this fic holds some truth. naruto's mask might be slipping soon. he keeps it all within himself! i love that
"Gaara hooking up with Tsunade-Sama?”
part! it's such a classic!
please update soon! =]
3/27/2005 c2 Amberfox and Lyell
Please update. We want to see if Naruto actually does go AWOL! That would be fun!
Please update. We want to see if Naruto actually does go AWOL! That would be fun!
3/26/2005 c2 sleepy kitty
o.o I'm not really sure how to feel about this.. its... odd... understandable as far as Naruto is concerned but.. odd...
o.o I'm not really sure how to feel about this.. its... odd... understandable as far as Naruto is concerned but.. odd...
3/25/2005 c2 RockFox
Really funny chapter! Hope Naruto get time alone! That bit about Lee and Gai-Sensei was very well placed!
Really funny chapter! Hope Naruto get time alone! That bit about Lee and Gai-Sensei was very well placed!