for The Day The Smile Slipped3/25/2005 c2 
3monkeycrunch88
oh my...i hope he doesn't cheer up Too soon, i like naruto angst fics. dont know why, but i do...
3monkeycrunch88oh my...i hope he doesn't cheer up Too soon, i like naruto angst fics. dont know why, but i do...
3/25/2005 c2 16AmberFox and Lyell
AF: You shouldn't feel overwelmed, your a very good writer. We have never seen a fic like yours before and we hope you update ASAP.
L: And if your oneshots are as good as this story, your bound to get more then twnty reviews!
16AmberFox and LyellAF: You shouldn't feel overwelmed, your a very good writer. We have never seen a fic like yours before and we hope you update ASAP.
L: And if your oneshots are as good as this story, your bound to get more then twnty reviews!
3/25/2005 c2 2VentMonster
lol sorry last review may have sounded like i hated it but like story just ahd a bad day
really like it so far
didnt mean to insult lol
and update soon great story so far
2VentMonsterlol sorry last review may have sounded like i hated it but like story just ahd a bad day
really like it so far
didnt mean to insult lol
and update soon great story so far
3/25/2005 c2 2Hisoka316
You got a good fic going here, keep it up :) Looking forward to the next chapter.
2Hisoka316You got a good fic going here, keep it up :) Looking forward to the next chapter.
3/25/2005 c2 NarutoNoKitsune
Where did Naruto go? Is he training? Did he ran away? What will he do next? Damn...there's too many questions in my head...
Where did Naruto go? Is he training? Did he ran away? What will he do next? Damn...there's too many questions in my head...
3/25/2005 c2 2ranma hibiki
wow! 20 min of spandex eyebrow freaks yealling to each other. this is bringing everything to a whole new light, and im gettin a camera to watch it
so you have any idea where naruto is headed for privacey. wont get it in his apartment, or the hokage monument...mabey in the forest of death where no one bothers to go, i could see him going there to relax.
keep updating
2ranma hibikiwow! 20 min of spandex eyebrow freaks yealling to each other. this is bringing everything to a whole new light, and im gettin a camera to watch it
so you have any idea where naruto is headed for privacey. wont get it in his apartment, or the hokage monument...mabey in the forest of death where no one bothers to go, i could see him going there to relax.
keep updating
3/24/2005 c2 9Dragon Man 180
Great chapter, Shino speaking was a nice touch. Poor Kiba, kidnapped by Lee for his nose. Sakura's joke about Tsunade and Gaara was great, pure comedy gold! I hope Hinata makes Naruto feel normal and doesn't make him feel awkward. Lee and Kiba should have a hard time getting Naruto to listen, the last two he would want to see would be dog boy and Mini-Gai
9Dragon Man 180Great chapter, Shino speaking was a nice touch. Poor Kiba, kidnapped by Lee for his nose. Sakura's joke about Tsunade and Gaara was great, pure comedy gold! I hope Hinata makes Naruto feel normal and doesn't make him feel awkward. Lee and Kiba should have a hard time getting Naruto to listen, the last two he would want to see would be dog boy and Mini-Gai
3/24/2005 c1 inuyasha-sakura
nice! we go naruto! love ur fic! update soon!
nice! we go naruto! love ur fic! update soon!