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3/24/2005 c1 8Fantasy's Magic
kool story! hope you update soon!
3/24/2005 c1 SuBeKi011213
yeh good story...will your story lead towards Naruto unleashing Kyuubi and becomes strong and stuff, or Hinata come to confert him?...don't bother answer my question, i wanna be suprised by your
3/24/2005 c1 hollywood1390
Very cool...update soon
3/24/2005 c1 1monkeycrunch88
o! Naruto is P-I-S-S-E-D!
3/24/2005 c1 crakbaby23
i like it a lot keep up the good work as usual
3/24/2005 c1 2ranma hibiki
id be out of wack too if i got no respect after doing all that. but it was funny to see narutos new nick names for his team mates! he he he teme sakura and mule headed sasuke...though kakashi could do with a better nick name

update soon
3/24/2005 c1 misao92

update please :D
3/24/2005 c1 3Ookami Mononoke
Hey, great story so far, it seems really interesting. Update soon, okay? I would like to read the rest. =^^=
3/24/2005 c1 2VentMonster
well i lied it till last 2 lines could have said something better and tail? come on but other than that good story update soon

oh this better not be oh we're sorry, hold hands and skip down the street into sunset to many of those pathetic stories dont need another
3/24/2005 c1 The Eromancer
I always love your fics, keep it up!
3/24/2005 c1 1KunochiDreamer
Interesting fic.
3/24/2005 c1 4Patch5129
o an angsty Naruto, cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update soon
3/24/2005 c1 9Dragon Man 180
I'm eager to see how Naruto reacts to the rest of the Rookie 9 and Gai's team if he meets them while wandering around the village. Sakura and Sasuke deserve to feel bad for not even greeting Naruto after all he has done for them. I wonder how long Kakashi will wait at the bridge before he goes looking for his students?
3/24/2005 c1 Arnoldstrife
W00t I LOVE YOUR STORY cool little one too Kinda odd but still naruto like! Ok hope you update soon
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