for The Day The Smile Slipped3/24/2005 c1 SuBeKi011213
yeh good story...will your story lead towards Naruto unleashing Kyuubi and becomes strong and stuff, or Hinata come to confert him?...don't bother answer my question, i wanna be suprised by your story...lol:D
yeh good story...will your story lead towards Naruto unleashing Kyuubi and becomes strong and stuff, or Hinata come to confert him?...don't bother answer my question, i wanna be suprised by your story...lol:D
3/24/2005 c1 
2ranma hibiki
id be out of wack too if i got no respect after doing all that. but it was funny to see narutos new nick names for his team mates! he he he teme sakura and mule headed sasuke...though kakashi could do with a better nick name
update soon
2ranma hibikiid be out of wack too if i got no respect after doing all that. but it was funny to see narutos new nick names for his team mates! he he he teme sakura and mule headed sasuke...though kakashi could do with a better nick name
update soon
3/24/2005 c1 3Ookami Mononoke
Hey, great story so far, it seems really interesting. Update soon, okay? I would like to read the rest. =^^=
3Ookami MononokeHey, great story so far, it seems really interesting. Update soon, okay? I would like to read the rest. =^^=
3/24/2005 c1 2VentMonster
well i lied it till last 2 lines could have said something better and tail? come on but other than that good story update soon
oh this better not be oh we're sorry, hold hands and skip down the street into sunset to many of those pathetic stories dont need another
2VentMonsterwell i lied it till last 2 lines could have said something better and tail? come on but other than that good story update soon
oh this better not be oh we're sorry, hold hands and skip down the street into sunset to many of those pathetic stories dont need another
3/24/2005 c1 9Dragon Man 180
I'm eager to see how Naruto reacts to the rest of the Rookie 9 and Gai's team if he meets them while wandering around the village. Sakura and Sasuke deserve to feel bad for not even greeting Naruto after all he has done for them. I wonder how long Kakashi will wait at the bridge before he goes looking for his students?
9Dragon Man 180I'm eager to see how Naruto reacts to the rest of the Rookie 9 and Gai's team if he meets them while wandering around the village. Sakura and Sasuke deserve to feel bad for not even greeting Naruto after all he has done for them. I wonder how long Kakashi will wait at the bridge before he goes looking for his students?
3/24/2005 c1 Arnoldstrife
W00t I LOVE YOUR STORY cool little one too Kinda odd but still naruto like! Ok hope you update soon
W00t I LOVE YOUR STORY cool little one too Kinda odd but still naruto like! Ok hope you update soon