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11/29/2015 c1 milkman95
This story is fucking amazing
8/18/2015 c7 Guest
I cried. I love it!
6/16/2015 c5 8This Username Is Classified
Oh my GAWD! I can TOTELLY sympathize with Naruto rn. I see them trying and trying 'till I MYSELF got annoyed! Like, how much more unfair can they get? Srsly. But yeah, great story!
5/22/2015 c7 24Ginger Flowerz
That's way better but why did you make shino die?
5/22/2015 c6 Ginger Flowerz
You had hinata die!? How could you?! I cried and I am not a person who cries the last time I cried was jiraiya's death
11/13/2014 c7 happy
Its so full of cheese :p jk. Good job
11/13/2014 c6 almost
But its sad.
8/4/2014 c6 Chast4
Great story man I was crying at the end!
7/20/2014 c7 2KoreanMusicFan
i think i like this ending the best.
7/15/2014 c7 Guest
i like the next ending except for the part that hinata died but it fits into the story ending perfect so cant complain bye
7/15/2014 c6 Guest
It is a real honor to read this it is both inspiring and touching you made me want to cry with a sense of i have no idea probably happiness it is story like these that i look forward to reading such wonderful mind blowing elegant stories you my friend have a gift so don't let anyone tell you otherwise thank you for writing this.
7/10/2013 c6 1Ethyrin Kairos
This is kinda sad. Definitely drama and angst.
6/27/2013 c1 Hannah
I recently looked up the meaning of Teme on the internet, it is a rude form of 'you'
5/5/2013 c3 Guest
Fuck you Bigotted asshole
4/9/2013 c5 Guest
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