for My mission in life7/8/2005 c1 sevati
Feh. has some dumb policy where I can't review the same chapter twice. This is about your story Unknown, where Blaise is a girl/Hermione's sister. In my insomniatic state, I think managed to also misspell Blaise's last name while trying to correct you. It's "Zabini". I think the reason so many people put an 'm' in there is because of the ice rink contraption known as the zamboni, they sound similar. My apologies.
Feh. has some dumb policy where I can't review the same chapter twice. This is about your story Unknown, where Blaise is a girl/Hermione's sister. In my insomniatic state, I think managed to also misspell Blaise's last name while trying to correct you. It's "Zabini". I think the reason so many people put an 'm' in there is because of the ice rink contraption known as the zamboni, they sound similar. My apologies.
6/30/2005 c2 
81Taintless
Hi! The firest chapter was good...quite sad, and there was some good emotion.
Snape was extremey funny in the second character, and it was written quite well, all in character.
But you keep switching from first POV (I said...) to third POV (Hermione ran...) and it's awfully annoying. You got to pick one and stick with it. And don't forget to add a couple of twists.
81TaintlessHi! The firest chapter was good...quite sad, and there was some good emotion.
Snape was extremey funny in the second character, and it was written quite well, all in character.
But you keep switching from first POV (I said...) to third POV (Hermione ran...) and it's awfully annoying. You got to pick one and stick with it. And don't forget to add a couple of twists.
4/15/2005 c2 2aquamarinebell
Oh my GOD this is so funny! but wasnt hermiones parents supposed to be thrilled about her going to school.
2aquamarinebellOh my GOD this is so funny! but wasnt hermiones parents supposed to be thrilled about her going to school.
3/28/2005 c1 10cylobaby
that sounds like it will be cool. Try to add more to the summary and MORE DETAILS! i loved it, though
10cylobabythat sounds like it will be cool. Try to add more to the summary and MORE DETAILS! i loved it, though
3/25/2005 c1 7Catchy Pen Name
Well, it was a bit vague, but for the most part I liked it. It was almost... dreamlike, in a sense. Well anyway, I think it was written well. My advice: set the scene a bit more.
7Catchy Pen NameWell, it was a bit vague, but for the most part I liked it. It was almost... dreamlike, in a sense. Well anyway, I think it was written well. My advice: set the scene a bit more.