
3/27/2005 c1 MM
This is amazing. I usually thing dialogue is a story's strongest point but you took a risk and didn't have any, the risk was well worth it because this is really good.
This is amazing. I usually thing dialogue is a story's strongest point but you took a risk and didn't have any, the risk was well worth it because this is really good.
3/26/2005 c1 Lehcar Sundance
Very nice begining. When you say one chapter fiction, does that mean you wont carry on writing the story?
Oh well
Leh Sundance
Very nice begining. When you say one chapter fiction, does that mean you wont carry on writing the story?
Oh well
Leh Sundance