for Little Women3/20/2016 c20 PowerofFour167
Did you forget about this story? Still wondering about Piper/Leo and Prue/Andy and hoping Paigsle ends up with Kyle! Plus the sisters and Paige with Sam and Victor. Please continue!
Did you forget about this story? Still wondering about Piper/Leo and Prue/Andy and hoping Paigsle ends up with Kyle! Plus the sisters and Paige with Sam and Victor. Please continue!
3/20/2016 c4 PowerofFour167
Loving this so far. I'm glad Paige isn't the same Teen Paige from the past on the show. I see that in a lot of fanfics and I always think to myself "They do realize she wouldn't be an alcoholic who does some drugs if she grew up with her sisters right?" I mean she did that stuff cuz she was abandoned and felt lost. If she grew up with her sisters she would prob be more like the Paige from S4 or S5, the one who dislikes being confined and controlled by her older sisters who are just trying to protect her.
Also Leo and Cole's brother realationship is great! I cant wait to see where you take it! Its kinda like early S4 with them.
Ps. I dont know if anyone mentioned this yet, but Leo's father's name is Christopher. They said it in an episode in season 6. Wyatt is named after his father and Chris is named after Leo's father...they could have meant Perry (I don't remember i'd have to re-watch it) but I'm pretty sure they meant the name Chris.
Loving this so far. I'm glad Paige isn't the same Teen Paige from the past on the show. I see that in a lot of fanfics and I always think to myself "They do realize she wouldn't be an alcoholic who does some drugs if she grew up with her sisters right?" I mean she did that stuff cuz she was abandoned and felt lost. If she grew up with her sisters she would prob be more like the Paige from S4 or S5, the one who dislikes being confined and controlled by her older sisters who are just trying to protect her.
Also Leo and Cole's brother realationship is great! I cant wait to see where you take it! Its kinda like early S4 with them.
Ps. I dont know if anyone mentioned this yet, but Leo's father's name is Christopher. They said it in an episode in season 6. Wyatt is named after his father and Chris is named after Leo's father...they could have meant Perry (I don't remember i'd have to re-watch it) but I'm pretty sure they meant the name Chris.
5/10/2010 c7 
5TippyToe Zombie
What are the ages of everyone in this?
I am the TippyToe Zombie
I like to limbo
Often I fall on people's heads
5TippyToe ZombieWhat are the ages of everyone in this?
I am the TippyToe Zombie
I like to limbo
Often I fall on people's heads
5/10/2010 c2 TippyToe Zombie
I like the way that you made Cole Leo's stepbrother, very good idea.
I am the TippyToe Zombie
I like to limbo
Often I fall on people's heads
I like the way that you made Cole Leo's stepbrother, very good idea.
I am the TippyToe Zombie
I like to limbo
Often I fall on people's heads
7/22/2009 c20 1icekrim91
interesting plot, i like the idea of the sisters bonding, overall, it is awesome and can't wait to read more from it soon
1icekrim91interesting plot, i like the idea of the sisters bonding, overall, it is awesome and can't wait to read more from it soon
7/2/2009 c20 to love him x
PLEASE update soon it's almost been YEARS... :(
xx
PLEASE update soon it's almost been YEARS... :(
xx
4/9/2009 c20 1Ashley xo
I said I would review at the end, so this is what i'm doing. This is an amazing plot and storyline. There were certain points that I questioned, however, that is because i am a HUGE charmed fan, especially of Piper and Leo, and I think a teen pregnancy between them would turn out great! I have put those questions down to creativity, on your behalf. You have a great talent and you need to give yourself more credit. I love the way it has been set out, and the way you portrayed the pregnancy as Phoebe's- in my mind at least- but turned it into Pipers. There were some points where I thought, what happened to this part of the story?, but then that part came up again in the next chapter. I think you are truly gifted and welldone!
Please read and review mine, 'The war at home baby blues' or something like that I called it. It is in misc Tv shows. You don't have to know the show to understand any of the fic, I just liked the characteristics. Thankyou for keeping me so entertained tonight.
x
Ashley
1Ashley xoI said I would review at the end, so this is what i'm doing. This is an amazing plot and storyline. There were certain points that I questioned, however, that is because i am a HUGE charmed fan, especially of Piper and Leo, and I think a teen pregnancy between them would turn out great! I have put those questions down to creativity, on your behalf. You have a great talent and you need to give yourself more credit. I love the way it has been set out, and the way you portrayed the pregnancy as Phoebe's- in my mind at least- but turned it into Pipers. There were some points where I thought, what happened to this part of the story?, but then that part came up again in the next chapter. I think you are truly gifted and welldone!
Please read and review mine, 'The war at home baby blues' or something like that I called it. It is in misc Tv shows. You don't have to know the show to understand any of the fic, I just liked the characteristics. Thankyou for keeping me so entertained tonight.
x
Ashley
4/9/2009 c7 Ashley xo
Dude...i'm really interested in this story, so i was gonna read it all before reviewing, but each chapter ive read so far, you've put yourself down. Don't keep saying your works bad or rubbish, or even just not good. You need to believe in yourself to succeed. A writer needs to have confidence in what they have written, and to have confidence, you dont care what other people think, you care what you think. This reviewing space is only for questions, praise and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Whatever anyone is going to say is to help you, and I think you need to realize that. I'm really hooked on this story, and I 'm going to read the rest, then, I will review and tell you what I think, and, if I feel the need, I will give you some pointers, without criticising your work. I really dont know how to spell criticising or however it is lol.
Good job
x
Ashley
Dude...i'm really interested in this story, so i was gonna read it all before reviewing, but each chapter ive read so far, you've put yourself down. Don't keep saying your works bad or rubbish, or even just not good. You need to believe in yourself to succeed. A writer needs to have confidence in what they have written, and to have confidence, you dont care what other people think, you care what you think. This reviewing space is only for questions, praise and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Whatever anyone is going to say is to help you, and I think you need to realize that. I'm really hooked on this story, and I 'm going to read the rest, then, I will review and tell you what I think, and, if I feel the need, I will give you some pointers, without criticising your work. I really dont know how to spell criticising or however it is lol.
Good job
x
Ashley
10/13/2008 c20 Sarah
ok, so jus wondering y u stopped writing this great story? x
ok, so jus wondering y u stopped writing this great story? x
2/21/2008 c20 Ginaaaa
I know its been 1 and a half years, but update! I love Phoebe and Cole, and I love that Piper's pregnant. I hope she keeps it becuase Leo seems so happy. I think Paige should go with Glenn, and have a good relationship with Sam.
I know its been 1 and a half years, but update! I love Phoebe and Cole, and I love that Piper's pregnant. I hope she keeps it becuase Leo seems so happy. I think Paige should go with Glenn, and have a good relationship with Sam.
2/7/2008 c20 13charmingbrenda
that was a very good story...please more prue...more sister moments...more school moments...i know that the halliwell's were famous in school..LOL... just wanna read something bout that..update soon..
13charmingbrendathat was a very good story...please more prue...more sister moments...more school moments...i know that the halliwell's were famous in school..LOL... just wanna read something bout that..update soon..