for To Kiss Or Not To Kiss4/5/2005 c1 
16Navvy
You've got a cute little interesting story here. Pretty good, and they seemed to be in character and such...honestly though, the plot was a little bland, like someone trying to be overdramatic yet speaking monotonously. And your grammar could use a bit of work (eek-switching constantly between present and past tense).
Other than that though, not bad at all. The part at the beginning with Lina and Gourry was my favourite :)
16NavvyYou've got a cute little interesting story here. Pretty good, and they seemed to be in character and such...honestly though, the plot was a little bland, like someone trying to be overdramatic yet speaking monotonously. And your grammar could use a bit of work (eek-switching constantly between present and past tense).
Other than that though, not bad at all. The part at the beginning with Lina and Gourry was my favourite :)
3/31/2005 c1 36Gerao-A
Alandra: man I have a million laught! this story is so cool!
Maliska: yeah, keep it up.
Poor martina...
36Gerao-AAlandra: man I have a million laught! this story is so cool!
Maliska: yeah, keep it up.
Poor martina...
3/30/2005 c1 23Ichiban Victory
Figures that would break the curse. ^_- That was very entertaining, and a fun read! (So what was it Lina made the food from?) :D
23Ichiban VictoryFigures that would break the curse. ^_- That was very entertaining, and a fun read! (So what was it Lina made the food from?) :D