4/19/2006 c3 20vouge09
Those are so short , I hope you update soon though.

6/12/2005 c2 10SevenMinutesToMidnight
I dont mean to be a critisism bug but first off, u should've combined the first and second chapter, and secondly, two words: beta reader. U need to get one, or have a pier edit ur story. Other than that, its pretty good so far

4/4/2005 c1 n
sounds good, now, on with the plot. ;)