10/23/2005 c4 Luxxe
I like this so far, but it needs to flow a little better.
I like this so far, but it needs to flow a little better.
8/26/2005 c1 Lisa Whaley
It's a good story so far, the dialogue is a little sappy but the rest of the *ahem* story is written really well. Please, please, add some more chapters. I've been waiting for Sean's reaction, then again, I was anticipating Sean's reaction in 'Agatha Ripp' and now I can't watch it without getting really mad, so take your time with that. I just want to see what happens next, if Christian, Mr. I couldn't-commit-if-my-life-depended-on-it, is really ready to settle down or if he's going to screw up the relationship. So far it's good.
It's a good story so far, the dialogue is a little sappy but the rest of the *ahem* story is written really well. Please, please, add some more chapters. I've been waiting for Sean's reaction, then again, I was anticipating Sean's reaction in 'Agatha Ripp' and now I can't watch it without getting really mad, so take your time with that. I just want to see what happens next, if Christian, Mr. I couldn't-commit-if-my-life-depended-on-it, is really ready to settle down or if he's going to screw up the relationship. So far it's good.
6/29/2005 c7 3PinkPantherx6x
It was a good story. It kind of ended weird.. if that was the end. Wanting part 8..
It was a good story. It kind of ended weird.. if that was the end. Wanting part 8..