for Of Power and Change2/24/2006 c17 Randl Scot
Hi I would jsuy like to say that this was a really good chapter now it was a bit short but I take it that you got a very big suprise in your next chapter.
And I must say that I am really shock that Mrs. Weasley did kill Albus Dumbledore. I thought for sure that she was going to roast him alive as if he was on a BBQ.
I guess that Albus Dumbledore is one very lucky person. But I think that Harry would not have to worry about Madam Pomfrey beause she will have to deal with the mighty Miss Ginny Weasley. LIKE MOTHER LIKE DAUGHTER then I guess that will make Madam Pomfrey BBQ.
SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND HAVE A NICE DAY!
P.S. SO FARE YOUR STORY IS THE BEST THAT I HAVE SEEN
I.T. R.O.C.K.S! I HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY! NICE! DAY!$
Hi I would jsuy like to say that this was a really good chapter now it was a bit short but I take it that you got a very big suprise in your next chapter.
And I must say that I am really shock that Mrs. Weasley did kill Albus Dumbledore. I thought for sure that she was going to roast him alive as if he was on a BBQ.
I guess that Albus Dumbledore is one very lucky person. But I think that Harry would not have to worry about Madam Pomfrey beause she will have to deal with the mighty Miss Ginny Weasley. LIKE MOTHER LIKE DAUGHTER then I guess that will make Madam Pomfrey BBQ.
SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND HAVE A NICE DAY!
P.S. SO FARE YOUR STORY IS THE BEST THAT I HAVE SEEN
I.T. R.O.C.K.S! I HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY! NICE! DAY!$
2/24/2006 c17 
1Bukama Stealth
Bloody brilliant!
I thought my idea of simply shapping a new arm was good but this most excellent.
I do worry that Harry is getting too powerful though, I mean there's the 7 or 10 potions, then there's the crystaline rune enhanced arm and finally there's Harry's power boost in roughly twenty days normal time... is the accelerated time of influence on Harry's magic or does Harry simply get more time to alter his to accept the boost.
By the by is Harry getting a rune enhanced sword to match possibly with shield... or armour?
1Bukama StealthBloody brilliant!
I thought my idea of simply shapping a new arm was good but this most excellent.
I do worry that Harry is getting too powerful though, I mean there's the 7 or 10 potions, then there's the crystaline rune enhanced arm and finally there's Harry's power boost in roughly twenty days normal time... is the accelerated time of influence on Harry's magic or does Harry simply get more time to alter his to accept the boost.
By the by is Harry getting a rune enhanced sword to match possibly with shield... or armour?
2/24/2006 c17 a reader
A beta reader would help, I think. You have consistent problems with using a word that sound similiar to the word you need, but is completely unrelated.
Suburb instead of superb, want instead of wand, lease rather least, etc.
A beta reader would help, I think. You have consistent problems with using a word that sound similiar to the word you need, but is completely unrelated.
Suburb instead of superb, want instead of wand, lease rather least, etc.
2/24/2006 c15 Bukama Stealth
You worte in this chapter that the Shifter ability couldn't regrow Harry's arm as the ability wasn't unlocked before he lost it. But shouldn't Harry be able to Shape a new arm to his body?
You worte in this chapter that the Shifter ability couldn't regrow Harry's arm as the ability wasn't unlocked before he lost it. But shouldn't Harry be able to Shape a new arm to his body?
2/24/2006 c14 Bukama Stealth
Shouldn't Harry be able to regrow his arm with his Shifter and/or Shaping abilities?
Shouldn't Harry be able to regrow his arm with his Shifter and/or Shaping abilities?
2/24/2006 c17 1Ascended Paladin
Great Job on the latest chapter. I can't wait until you get to the point of explaining more about Harry's new arm and his new powers. Anyway again great job on the latest chapter and I hope you can update again soon.
1Ascended PaladinGreat Job on the latest chapter. I can't wait until you get to the point of explaining more about Harry's new arm and his new powers. Anyway again great job on the latest chapter and I hope you can update again soon.
2/24/2006 c17 SimpleSailor
Well this has so far been quite an interesting story. I am definitely curious as to how Harry and Ginny are going to cure her. Will it be a marriage ceremony or something of the sort? Anyway, I really like what I have read so far.
Well this has so far been quite an interesting story. I am definitely curious as to how Harry and Ginny are going to cure her. Will it be a marriage ceremony or something of the sort? Anyway, I really like what I have read so far.
2/21/2006 c16 ColPinky
Good story. It is fun, although I would like to hear more about the group that attacked Harry. Some people don't like superharry stories. I think they are fun if done well, and creativity for how Harry becomes super is a good addition, which you have done. So, now I'm waiting for the next chapter, hurry up! Keep up the good work.
Good story. It is fun, although I would like to hear more about the group that attacked Harry. Some people don't like superharry stories. I think they are fun if done well, and creativity for how Harry becomes super is a good addition, which you have done. So, now I'm waiting for the next chapter, hurry up! Keep up the good work.
2/21/2006 c16 1Ascended Paladin
Great job on the story so far, I am really looking forward to seeing the rest of it. I really hope you can update as soon as possible.
1Ascended PaladinGreat job on the story so far, I am really looking forward to seeing the rest of it. I really hope you can update as soon as possible.