4/22/2005 c18 3Latisha C
Fianally, I can give you the reason why not too many people have reviewed his story. The problem here is that you basically posted up the entire story in one day, instead of giving them a taste and making them review asking for more. You're a great writer and I bet if you were to take my advice, you'd probably get way more reviews than you have now.

Lori

4/22/2005 c16 Latisha C
Again great chapter.

4/22/2005 c14 Latisha C
Great chapter. I just realized that you're following what happened back in 2003. Anyway keep up the great writing.

4/22/2005 c12 Latisha C
ATV, huh? Taking a page out of my idol "stone Cold" Stev Austin's book eh? Keep up the great writing.

4/22/2005 c10 Latisha C
Did you know that chapter ten is the same as chapter nine?

4/22/2005 c8 Latisha C
That was probably all Paul Heyman's doing and I'm willing to bet a dollar on that. Keep up the great writing.

4/22/2005 c6 Latisha C
You are very good at descriptive writing.