
8/3/2016 c1
7SneezySoul
OH MY GAWD I LAUGHED SO HARD xDD
Like i thought "oh they must have put two and two together, or maybe they saw him transform? Did Jazz tell them finally?"
BUT THEN
YOU REVEALED HE NEVER CHANGED BACK OH MY LORD IM DY ING xDD

OH MY GAWD I LAUGHED SO HARD xDD
Like i thought "oh they must have put two and two together, or maybe they saw him transform? Did Jazz tell them finally?"
BUT THEN
YOU REVEALED HE NEVER CHANGED BACK OH MY LORD IM DY ING xDD
2/29/2012 c1
78Fighter1357
You said you'd write the chapter shortly...and this was published in 2005. You seriously need to update man, cuz' I wanna know what going to happen.

You said you'd write the chapter shortly...and this was published in 2005. You seriously need to update man, cuz' I wanna know what going to happen.
2/18/2011 c1 TCOGS
Hahaha... omg, after all that hard work keeping his secret... epic fail on Danny's part! Seriously!
Hahaha... omg, after all that hard work keeping his secret... epic fail on Danny's part! Seriously!
12/11/2008 c1
5The Sleep-Deprived Writer
With English, it is 'boring,' not 'boreing.' The reason is that, when you add -ing, you tend to drop the last e if there's an e.

With English, it is 'boring,' not 'boreing.' The reason is that, when you add -ing, you tend to drop the last e if there's an e.
7/28/2006 c1 Gadget14
where have u gone this story is cool and you just leave it come on just come back and update and if you don't i know where you live (i don't really but i'll find out!) please update and if you don't i'll understand (wipes tear from eye) i'm so alone...
where have u gone this story is cool and you just leave it come on just come back and update and if you don't i know where you live (i don't really but i'll find out!) please update and if you don't i'll understand (wipes tear from eye) i'm so alone...
5/2/2006 c1 GhostoftheWaterflame
OH MY GOD! HE SPILT HIS SECRET? DUDE, YOU MUST WRITE MORE! PLEASE!
OH MY GOD! HE SPILT HIS SECRET? DUDE, YOU MUST WRITE MORE! PLEASE!
12/17/2005 c1
9whirlgirl
Great 1st Chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading your next chapter!
I'll be waiting till then!
Whirlgirl Signing Out!

Great 1st Chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading your next chapter!
I'll be waiting till then!
Whirlgirl Signing Out!
10/25/2005 c1
2CollegeGirl4
I LOVE THIS STORY! Please write the next chapter! Your new writing friend, Ashleigh.

I LOVE THIS STORY! Please write the next chapter! Your new writing friend, Ashleigh.
7/23/2005 c1 Courtney
When's ch. 2 coming? Cause i'm hooked!
When's ch. 2 coming? Cause i'm hooked!
7/8/2005 c1 Hunter
kool finish the story.
Grim reaper
Grim realites
kool finish the story.
Grim reaper
Grim realites