for The Legend of Uzumaki Naruto: A Beginning1/20/2021 c61 
13actionliker
Just finished reading this again for the first time in nearly 10 years ago and it's still as good as i remembered. I'm so glad you wrote this even though part two is discontinued, but I amazed of how much work and dedication you created here.
Also to the new/future readers that are posting hate comments, shame on you guys. Maybe there are quite a few spelling or grammar mistakes, but bashing General Grievous about "oh, Kyuubi isn't that" or "How can they have Chakra, because of Ten Tailed Beast - blah blah blah."
Do you guys even look at the YEAR the story posted and when it was last updated? Stuff like that you are spewing happened waaay after he wrote all of this.
13actionlikerJust finished reading this again for the first time in nearly 10 years ago and it's still as good as i remembered. I'm so glad you wrote this even though part two is discontinued, but I amazed of how much work and dedication you created here.
Also to the new/future readers that are posting hate comments, shame on you guys. Maybe there are quite a few spelling or grammar mistakes, but bashing General Grievous about "oh, Kyuubi isn't that" or "How can they have Chakra, because of Ten Tailed Beast - blah blah blah."
Do you guys even look at the YEAR the story posted and when it was last updated? Stuff like that you are spewing happened waaay after he wrote all of this.
1/14/2021 c1 Yami Fenikkusu
This is a NaruSaku story which mean it is not my type of story. Sorry dude and bye.
This is a NaruSaku story which mean it is not my type of story. Sorry dude and bye.
8/31/2020 c16 KalthosNamikaze
now we know why mekkatorque had that blush he is a pervert lol tho sentinel armour leaves not much to the imagination haha
now we know why mekkatorque had that blush he is a pervert lol tho sentinel armour leaves not much to the imagination haha
6/9/2019 c6 Tobi Runihura
MarsAlis are my favorite pairing and.I love that you and I share the same interests
MarsAlis are my favorite pairing and.I love that you and I share the same interests
5/31/2019 c33 Guest
Leave sakura out this story is so good without herding ruin it
Leave sakura out this story is so good without herding ruin it
5/21/2019 c6 Guest
Type your review useless plot start
Type your review useless plot start
4/23/2019 c51 silversnitch4765
Shouldn’t Minato or Kushina have helped Naruto, Minato to reseal Kyuubi and Kushina to hold him down?
Shouldn’t Minato or Kushina have helped Naruto, Minato to reseal Kyuubi and Kushina to hold him down?
7/9/2018 c29 2Nihatclodra
that pirate of yours isn't likable in the slightest... he makes me think of what would happen if Blackbeard (from one-piece), Dolores Umbridge (Harry Potter), and Gilderoy Lockhart (also from Harry Potter) were fused into a single person...
2Nihatclodrathat pirate of yours isn't likable in the slightest... he makes me think of what would happen if Blackbeard (from one-piece), Dolores Umbridge (Harry Potter), and Gilderoy Lockhart (also from Harry Potter) were fused into a single person...
7/8/2018 c21 Nihatclodra
That Venture bastard is basically Gato... may he be torn limb-from-limb as painfully as possible until death.
That Venture bastard is basically Gato... may he be torn limb-from-limb as painfully as possible until death.
7/8/2018 c53 Issy786
wtf fuck you and this story wat bull shit is this story how the fuck can they have fucking charka it's belongs to the juubi and they need to be born with it u fucking cunt I hope u fucking kill urself u sorry excuse of a bitch
wtf fuck you and this story wat bull shit is this story how the fuck can they have fucking charka it's belongs to the juubi and they need to be born with it u fucking cunt I hope u fucking kill urself u sorry excuse of a bitch