for Love in the Darkness6/6/2005 c1 
7HoneydukesAddict
thats pretty good! very sad.. and very short.. write more stuff! srry it took so long to read.
-mello80-
7HoneydukesAddictthats pretty good! very sad.. and very short.. write more stuff! srry it took so long to read.
-mello80-
4/16/2005 c1 blodegolfer.opps.sorry
i love it its really sweet i no that sounds weird cause they died but i really like it keep up the good work always a happy reader:-D
i love it its really sweet i no that sounds weird cause they died but i really like it keep up the good work always a happy reader:-D
4/13/2005 c1 2ambassador.to.the.Beyond
like it? love it? HATE IT? ARE YOU NUTSO THAT WAS SO SAD AND WONDERFUL I ALMOST CRIED! I THINK I AM GONNA CRY! ::boohoo:: I DON'T WANT DRACO TO DIE WHEN HE'S THE GOOD GUY! I REALLY NEED TO MAKE UP MY MIND DON'T I ? cots to go, c ya 2morrow.
::*~jesse~*::
2ambassador.to.the.Beyondlike it? love it? HATE IT? ARE YOU NUTSO THAT WAS SO SAD AND WONDERFUL I ALMOST CRIED! I THINK I AM GONNA CRY! ::boohoo:: I DON'T WANT DRACO TO DIE WHEN HE'S THE GOOD GUY! I REALLY NEED TO MAKE UP MY MIND DON'T I ? cots to go, c ya 2morrow.
::*~jesse~*::
4/13/2005 c1 becca
that was BRILLIANT absoloutly fab!
I Love write another 1 and another 1 and (ect ect)
You're a brilliant writer and a J.K Rowling/ jaquline wilson of the future:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
that was BRILLIANT absoloutly fab!
I Love write another 1 and another 1 and (ect ect)
You're a brilliant writer and a J.K Rowling/ jaquline wilson of the future:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
4/13/2005 c1 4starsinhereyes93
aw... this sounds like a really sweet story. The plot is great! I wonder what'l happen to Ginny and Draco, and I hope they get back 2gether because they made a cute couple. I would have liked to see a Prolouge, because you mentioned that Ginny made Draco go to the Dark Side so he wouldn't die. You could have done the Prolouge, and then go onto the 1st Chapter. But still, great story! Update soon pleez.
4starsinhereyes93aw... this sounds like a really sweet story. The plot is great! I wonder what'l happen to Ginny and Draco, and I hope they get back 2gether because they made a cute couple. I would have liked to see a Prolouge, because you mentioned that Ginny made Draco go to the Dark Side so he wouldn't die. You could have done the Prolouge, and then go onto the 1st Chapter. But still, great story! Update soon pleez.
4/13/2005 c1 grace07
The dietary habits of the Dodo bird, and how their unusual three-way mating habits where they are surrounded by family, friends, and co-workers from the local police precinct who witness the passing of the unborn child from mother to father by the local virginal janitor have influenced the economic rise and fall of not only 2.478974th World Countries, but inadvertantly led to the creation of Boohbah, Teletubbies, and low-fat chocolate cheesecake made with tofu. And possibly gave us Milli Vanilli, but lab experiments have yet to be conclusive on that matter.
And now, as a result of the Dodo bird taking this act to Vegas, the Men In Black are having to negotiate with the Outer Space Three-Headed, One-Eyed, One-Horned, Flying Purple People Eaters In Yellow Polka-Dot Bikinis Who Are On Limited Social Security to see if they can't talk them out of blowing up Earth to clear the way for a new extention of The Interstellar Highway 101. And to get them to stop trying to audition for American Idol, have them audtion for The Apprentice instead.
Then I'd say that if I had the time, I'd share with them the REALLY shocking secret of what albino elephants doing the lambada in puce-colored spandex with frilly neon pink tutus has to do with global warming, but that I'm late for my volcanic mud bath and facial peel, so could they meet me in about 2789 years, I've got an opening then in my schedule, I could possibly pencil them in for a 1 second appointment, but only if they called for it back in 1321. Otherwise, I'm booked solid until 5348.
The dietary habits of the Dodo bird, and how their unusual three-way mating habits where they are surrounded by family, friends, and co-workers from the local police precinct who witness the passing of the unborn child from mother to father by the local virginal janitor have influenced the economic rise and fall of not only 2.478974th World Countries, but inadvertantly led to the creation of Boohbah, Teletubbies, and low-fat chocolate cheesecake made with tofu. And possibly gave us Milli Vanilli, but lab experiments have yet to be conclusive on that matter.
And now, as a result of the Dodo bird taking this act to Vegas, the Men In Black are having to negotiate with the Outer Space Three-Headed, One-Eyed, One-Horned, Flying Purple People Eaters In Yellow Polka-Dot Bikinis Who Are On Limited Social Security to see if they can't talk them out of blowing up Earth to clear the way for a new extention of The Interstellar Highway 101. And to get them to stop trying to audition for American Idol, have them audtion for The Apprentice instead.
Then I'd say that if I had the time, I'd share with them the REALLY shocking secret of what albino elephants doing the lambada in puce-colored spandex with frilly neon pink tutus has to do with global warming, but that I'm late for my volcanic mud bath and facial peel, so could they meet me in about 2789 years, I've got an opening then in my schedule, I could possibly pencil them in for a 1 second appointment, but only if they called for it back in 1321. Otherwise, I'm booked solid until 5348.
4/12/2005 c1 10fly-away-free
Ugh, despite my HATE HATE HATE for Draco/Ginny, it wasn't bad, pretty interesting, and for a first-time, fairly good. I liked the "Say hello to Sirius" part that Harry said. Good thing to add.
A piece of advice: maybe have a little more detail, on Draco and Ginny's deaths, add in some more emotion. Put some feeling into it- as a writer, you witnessed it all happen, don't make it sound like you just read it in a newspaper.
And it's probably just me, but I would love to read an angstier version of this, where Draco kills Ginny and then a description of his feelings, self-hate.
Keep up the good work!
10fly-away-freeUgh, despite my HATE HATE HATE for Draco/Ginny, it wasn't bad, pretty interesting, and for a first-time, fairly good. I liked the "Say hello to Sirius" part that Harry said. Good thing to add.
A piece of advice: maybe have a little more detail, on Draco and Ginny's deaths, add in some more emotion. Put some feeling into it- as a writer, you witnessed it all happen, don't make it sound like you just read it in a newspaper.
And it's probably just me, but I would love to read an angstier version of this, where Draco kills Ginny and then a description of his feelings, self-hate.
Keep up the good work!
4/12/2005 c1 4EternalEcho
Aww don't delete it... it could bring in some nice reviews! I liked it! Wouldn't go as far as loved it tho. But that's only because you killed them! You're a murderer! How could you? But anyway, it was very good.
4EternalEchoAww don't delete it... it could bring in some nice reviews! I liked it! Wouldn't go as far as loved it tho. But that's only because you killed them! You're a murderer! How could you? But anyway, it was very good.
4/12/2005 c1 4FizzingWhizbeez
Oh this was bee-you-tiful, absolutely brilliant! Very sad, though... and I didn't expect for them to die! But the ending made up for it; what a great way to end! Nice and poignant, and just vague enough to leave the reader guessing.
Did this review make sense to you at all? I just went back and read it and realized the last part was rather ambiguous. But oh well. lol... A certain person absolutely loves this certain one-shot and wonders if a certain author will update soon? ;)
4FizzingWhizbeezOh this was bee-you-tiful, absolutely brilliant! Very sad, though... and I didn't expect for them to die! But the ending made up for it; what a great way to end! Nice and poignant, and just vague enough to leave the reader guessing.
Did this review make sense to you at all? I just went back and read it and realized the last part was rather ambiguous. But oh well. lol... A certain person absolutely loves this certain one-shot and wonders if a certain author will update soon? ;)
4/12/2005 c1 81Taintless
Oh, I really, really, really liked the last line. The rest of the fic was good, but the last line showed a really hidden talent. It kind of made the story click, if that makes sense.
81TaintlessOh, I really, really, really liked the last line. The rest of the fic was good, but the last line showed a really hidden talent. It kind of made the story click, if that makes sense.
4/12/2005 c1 5The Snake's Lady
omg that was soo beutiful,sad yes ,but beautiful!*sniff* i tried not to cry. Ginny/Draco 4 eva!
~Jenny aka The Lion's Chick
5The Snake's Ladyomg that was soo beutiful,sad yes ,but beautiful!*sniff* i tried not to cry. Ginny/Draco 4 eva!
~Jenny aka The Lion's Chick