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2crimsontears82684
I had to stop here. The plor inconsistancies were too much. The only characters not treated as if they are incompetent piles of uselessness were Kurama, Hiei and Shippo. Everyone else is portrayed with this attitude of disgust, as if the author is only writing about these characters because they cant think of another way to work the story without them. The plot has potential to be interesting but the stuff in the Spirit World is useless filler and distracting. This woukd have been ok if the plot were smoothed out and the characters written closer to canon.
2crimsontears82684I had to stop here. The plor inconsistancies were too much. The only characters not treated as if they are incompetent piles of uselessness were Kurama, Hiei and Shippo. Everyone else is portrayed with this attitude of disgust, as if the author is only writing about these characters because they cant think of another way to work the story without them. The plot has potential to be interesting but the stuff in the Spirit World is useless filler and distracting. This woukd have been ok if the plot were smoothed out and the characters written closer to canon.
6/24/2009 c11 anon
In the second movie, Yusuke purified an orb of energy so evil that even Emporer Enma couldn't touch it.
In the second movie, Yusuke purified an orb of energy so evil that even Emporer Enma couldn't touch it.
11/20/2008 c27 AlucardLevel0
This was an amazing story, but you should have let Hiei use his dragon. And you better make a sequel or im gonna use Hiei's dragon on you.
This was an amazing story, but you should have let Hiei use his dragon. And you better make a sequel or im gonna use Hiei's dragon on you.
4/6/2008 c20 6sandrilenefatoren2
I don't know why, but 'Hiei vs Fly' is the funniest thing I have read in a long time. Death! Death to the fly! Nyeeheeheehee!
6sandrilenefatoren2I don't know why, but 'Hiei vs Fly' is the funniest thing I have read in a long time. Death! Death to the fly! Nyeeheeheehee!
12/18/2007 c27 2Dark Lord Of Ori
Dear god that was a awesome story! Make a sequel, Make a sequel, Make a sequel! (chibi Ori cheering in background with the ancient's looking on in horror)
2Dark Lord Of OriDear god that was a awesome story! Make a sequel, Make a sequel, Make a sequel! (chibi Ori cheering in background with the ancient's looking on in horror)
1/21/2007 c27 ForestWind
Bravo! I loved that story, by far the best YYH and IY crossover yet. It was very nicely written and had a followable plot, I also loved the Kurama Shippo interactions, it's been on my mind awhile about how they would get a long. I might even write a fic about it... anyway good job, keep up the work!
-Forest (sorry to lazy to sign in!)
Bravo! I loved that story, by far the best YYH and IY crossover yet. It was very nicely written and had a followable plot, I also loved the Kurama Shippo interactions, it's been on my mind awhile about how they would get a long. I might even write a fic about it... anyway good job, keep up the work!
-Forest (sorry to lazy to sign in!)
8/30/2006 c27 33S. T. Nickolian
I loved it! I'm sorry it had to end. Thanks for a great story, and hope you write more!
33S. T. NickolianI loved it! I'm sorry it had to end. Thanks for a great story, and hope you write more!