for My brother in law5/25/2005 c4 
5Bel Vezer
Wow! I'm so intrigued! Keep writing please! I love it! Cole and Piper are so perfect together!
5Bel VezerWow! I'm so intrigued! Keep writing please! I love it! Cole and Piper are so perfect together!
5/24/2005 c4 Piper4Cole
The Siren? Don’t let Cole die, save him. Great chapter. Update
The Siren? Don’t let Cole die, save him. Great chapter. Update
5/23/2005 c3 Piper4Cole
Phoebe is cheating on COle. Piper and Cole should be together now.
Phoebe is cheating on COle. Piper and Cole should be together now.
5/12/2005 c2 coles lady
love it ,love cole and piper.
love it ,love cole and piper.
5/9/2005 c3 16Blue eyes6
Great chpt. I loved it.
I knew Phoeeb was fooling around with Will, especially when she didn't want Paige anywhere near him. I would love for Piper to see Phoebe with Will, then she wouldn't feel so guilty about having his daughter.
16Blue eyes6Great chpt. I loved it.
I knew Phoeeb was fooling around with Will, especially when she didn't want Paige anywhere near him. I would love for Piper to see Phoebe with Will, then she wouldn't feel so guilty about having his daughter.
5/8/2005 c3 aurora
another great chapter...i knew phoebe was up to something...piper and cole!
another great chapter...i knew phoebe was up to something...piper and cole!
5/7/2005 c3 CharmedMilliE
cool. don't bind them.
cool. don't bind them.
5/7/2005 c3 winter blaze
this is amazing please write more soon
this is amazing please write more soon
5/7/2005 c2 The Judge
No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no!
This is all wrong.
Piper is not that kind of girl. She would never do that to anybody, not even Leo, and much less to her baby sister. (don't you watch the show?)
Please, this is a great story; you have talent, but try and fix this mess right oaway. Please make it be a nasty dream for her, and wake her up already.
No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no!
This is all wrong.
Piper is not that kind of girl. She would never do that to anybody, not even Leo, and much less to her baby sister. (don't you watch the show?)
Please, this is a great story; you have talent, but try and fix this mess right oaway. Please make it be a nasty dream for her, and wake her up already.