4/24/2005 c1 3Setsuna Eleison
we... I just finished reading the first chapter... It is kinda funny... tee hee... ^^ hmm... I thought maybe Rukawa was just asleep while he was being robbed... Hahaha... ^^ There isn't any OOC in here, in my opinion. But with regards to the plot, I think it lacks emphasis about the real story. Better think up something that will make the readers understand the real concept... You know... ^^

But it kinda nice, imagine Mitsui holding on for dear life just to get Kaoru's number.. haha... =D Keep it up and update soon... Godbless! Take care... =D

PS: oh yeah, can you arrange the text? It's really jumbled up and it's hard reading the dialogs... ne? Thanks...