for Background Noise6/10/2012 c1 CCGurl
Wow. An well-written one-shot that could've been even better as a multi-chaptered fic. You captured the character's personalities perfectly and the essence of School Rumble even better.
Wow. An well-written one-shot that could've been even better as a multi-chaptered fic. You captured the character's personalities perfectly and the essence of School Rumble even better.
4/27/2011 c1 
41OneWingedHeron53
This was a good read.
If you don't mind, I would like to do something similar to this, not a complete copy. In fact, this is more of an inspiration. You see, I'm on a mission to try and convince the man himself to bring back School Rumble to its original glory. Being six years, I'm sure you know by now that School Rumble ended with false happiness. I'm trying to change that.
Cheers
41OneWingedHeron53This was a good read.
If you don't mind, I would like to do something similar to this, not a complete copy. In fact, this is more of an inspiration. You see, I'm on a mission to try and convince the man himself to bring back School Rumble to its original glory. Being six years, I'm sure you know by now that School Rumble ended with false happiness. I'm trying to change that.
Cheers
9/22/2010 c1 15YamadaTsukamoto
id recommend you finish this story but then again its up to you if you want to finish it btw its awesome so far wish i could know what happens at the end! XD all in all, it deserves to be a chapter series fic :)
- YamadaTsukamoto
15YamadaTsukamotoid recommend you finish this story but then again its up to you if you want to finish it btw its awesome so far wish i could know what happens at the end! XD all in all, it deserves to be a chapter series fic :)
- YamadaTsukamoto
9/13/2010 c1 1Rogeta
This was a very good one-shot. You portrayed the characters mental processes well and made them act like how Kobayashi would make them act. Shame that this is only a one-shot, as I can picture this being a 5 chapter series. Good Job!
1RogetaThis was a very good one-shot. You portrayed the characters mental processes well and made them act like how Kobayashi would make them act. Shame that this is only a one-shot, as I can picture this being a 5 chapter series. Good Job!
6/15/2010 c1 24Partners-N-Crime
aww such a cute one-shot! YakumoxHarima is my fave school rumble character
24Partners-N-Crimeaww such a cute one-shot! YakumoxHarima is my fave school rumble character
3/19/2009 c1 1bigherb81
You know you never realize certain things until sombody else says something about them. I mean I never would have thougt of that as a reason Yakumo fell for Harima. Great story.
1bigherb81You know you never realize certain things until sombody else says something about them. I mean I never would have thougt of that as a reason Yakumo fell for Harima. Great story.
2/19/2008 c1 10ShinMasaki
Heh, I'm liking a number of your stories. This one is very good and follows along the same thoughts that I've had about Yakumo. Yakumo is a strong willed person able to walk through her life day after day with those thoughts around her all the time.
Harima must seem like a refuge, an enigma as well. I love the pairing between these two. I think this story works very good as a one-shot, whether you continue or not is on you, but this is very well done.
One thing though, as he is her senpai and also due to her personality, Yakumo calls Harima by -san rather than -kun. Only thing that stood out to me. Very good job, when I get the time, I'll read your others.
Creme de Menthe is another of my favorites of yours. Thanks for contributing your writings for all to enjoy.
10ShinMasakiHeh, I'm liking a number of your stories. This one is very good and follows along the same thoughts that I've had about Yakumo. Yakumo is a strong willed person able to walk through her life day after day with those thoughts around her all the time.
Harima must seem like a refuge, an enigma as well. I love the pairing between these two. I think this story works very good as a one-shot, whether you continue or not is on you, but this is very well done.
One thing though, as he is her senpai and also due to her personality, Yakumo calls Harima by -san rather than -kun. Only thing that stood out to me. Very good job, when I get the time, I'll read your others.
Creme de Menthe is another of my favorites of yours. Thanks for contributing your writings for all to enjoy.
12/26/2007 c1 9Don Piano
Tragic that its only a one shot.
I'll add this to my alert list only as a fleeting hope.
Don Piano
9Don PianoTragic that its only a one shot.
I'll add this to my alert list only as a fleeting hope.
Don Piano
7/3/2007 c1 RandomReview
Wah, too good to be a one-shot!
Open up this story again and expand on it, please ='(
Wah, too good to be a one-shot!
Open up this story again and expand on it, please ='(
3/26/2007 c1 tonotsay
*Sigh* Why can't Harima notice Yakumo is the girl he should like NOT Tenma. Tenma is a block-head...who can fall in love with her? (Besides Nara, he can have her he looks "kiddy" like Tenma.)
*Sigh* Why can't Harima notice Yakumo is the girl he should like NOT Tenma. Tenma is a block-head...who can fall in love with her? (Besides Nara, he can have her he looks "kiddy" like Tenma.)
8/14/2006 c1 Reader
One of my fave fanfics so far... how could it be a one shot? ah... now ive gotta find something else to read. darn.
One of my fave fanfics so far... how could it be a one shot? ah... now ive gotta find something else to read. darn.
8/13/2006 c1 jon
aw... thats sweet... how about a continuation of this story?
aw... thats sweet... how about a continuation of this story?