for Harry Potter and the Sword of Astragal7/2/2024 c13 WeisseHex
It IS what Voldie deserves, nothing more, nothing less. If he is dumb enough to ask for help from someone worse then him, well, then his downfall is more then assured!
It IS what Voldie deserves, nothing more, nothing less. If he is dumb enough to ask for help from someone worse then him, well, then his downfall is more then assured!
10/5/2021 c3 majere4
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...She was amazed at some of the rare volumes, including some very rare papyrus scrolls from wizards in the Egyptian New Kingdom Period. The library also contained Merlin's original spell books and a diary of Rowena Ravenclaw.
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*cringes* You took things a little too far there, with Merlin's spell books. Ravenclaw's diaries is fairly reasonable, potentially allowing for something powerful, but mostly just giving insights into the Founders. The spell books are simply too much, allowing for magics not seen in this age. If you don't intend to bring such into the story, then don't bring such a likely source and drop it in like a random snorkack sighting.
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...She was amazed at some of the rare volumes, including some very rare papyrus scrolls from wizards in the Egyptian New Kingdom Period. The library also contained Merlin's original spell books and a diary of Rowena Ravenclaw.
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*cringes* You took things a little too far there, with Merlin's spell books. Ravenclaw's diaries is fairly reasonable, potentially allowing for something powerful, but mostly just giving insights into the Founders. The spell books are simply too much, allowing for magics not seen in this age. If you don't intend to bring such into the story, then don't bring such a likely source and drop it in like a random snorkack sighting.
10/4/2021 c2 majere4
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"You're so beautiful." Then he blushed at his own words.
Luna blushed sweetly and whispered, "So are you, Harry."
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*grins happily* This is the kind of innocent dialogue that only two kids who just don't care what anyone else thinks can have.
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"Does Professor Dumbledore know you are telling me this?"
"Yes, Harry; he does. I had a long talk with him the night Luna went to get you. He realizes that this fight is as much yours as it is ours, and he believes that he was wrong in keeping so much from you. He knows that you are almost an adult, and need to be treated as one. I think from now on you'll notice a major change in his treatment of you."
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WOW. Ok, so, that predicates what I was confused about, namely the idea that Dumbledore would let any of this happen in the first place!
That cave! Wonderful descriptions of the feelings and emotions.
"One for romantics." You said in the preview... this story has me smiling happily.
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"You're so beautiful." Then he blushed at his own words.
Luna blushed sweetly and whispered, "So are you, Harry."
"
*grins happily* This is the kind of innocent dialogue that only two kids who just don't care what anyone else thinks can have.
"
"Does Professor Dumbledore know you are telling me this?"
"Yes, Harry; he does. I had a long talk with him the night Luna went to get you. He realizes that this fight is as much yours as it is ours, and he believes that he was wrong in keeping so much from you. He knows that you are almost an adult, and need to be treated as one. I think from now on you'll notice a major change in his treatment of you."
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WOW. Ok, so, that predicates what I was confused about, namely the idea that Dumbledore would let any of this happen in the first place!
That cave! Wonderful descriptions of the feelings and emotions.
"One for romantics." You said in the preview... this story has me smiling happily.
10/4/2021 c1 majere4
Heh, fun start! Harry has found a genuinely loving girl in Luna, that's for sure. Ginny with Nev is an outstanding match as well. I'm putting aside my general disdain for Hr/RW in hopes that he'll be AU.
Heh, fun start! Harry has found a genuinely loving girl in Luna, that's for sure. Ginny with Nev is an outstanding match as well. I'm putting aside my general disdain for Hr/RW in hopes that he'll be AU.
8/4/2021 c18 
1YourOrdinaryStranger
ok, have not finished the whole chapter. but what if dying together, it means that after the chosen one (harry) kills the dark lord, luna, who loves him most must marry him, and they must die together happily with their family? cause don't they live cuz the children?
1YourOrdinaryStrangerok, have not finished the whole chapter. but what if dying together, it means that after the chosen one (harry) kills the dark lord, luna, who loves him most must marry him, and they must die together happily with their family? cause don't they live cuz the children?
7/16/2021 c18 karol
I have read this story countless times and I am sure I will never get tired of it, it is definitely one of my favourites, it is comforting and sweet, lunarry is just perfect, I love them too much. You've done a great job here and I hope one day you come back with more stories of this wonderful but somewhat underrated couple.
I have read this story countless times and I am sure I will never get tired of it, it is definitely one of my favourites, it is comforting and sweet, lunarry is just perfect, I love them too much. You've done a great job here and I hope one day you come back with more stories of this wonderful but somewhat underrated couple.
6/26/2021 c3 Guest
I'm getting out before I get diabetes, author. You're unnecessarily good at inflicting sweetness.
I'm getting out before I get diabetes, author. You're unnecessarily good at inflicting sweetness.
6/26/2021 c2 Guest
I'm dying from romance poisoning here, author. There is such a thing as too romantic. The fluffiness is oppressive.
The only problem is that you made everything too good to be true. Luna is approaching the Marysue asymptote.
I'm dying from romance poisoning here, author. There is such a thing as too romantic. The fluffiness is oppressive.
The only problem is that you made everything too good to be true. Luna is approaching the Marysue asymptote.
5/25/2020 c13 7Slayer76
"which is rather strange because it's not really a Lynx nor was it ever found in Iceland"
Sounds like a Guinea Pig situation
7Slayer76"which is rather strange because it's not really a Lynx nor was it ever found in Iceland"
Sounds like a Guinea Pig situation
1/7/2020 c12 2Specky Clarke
Voldemort was waiting in Arthur's tomb on an Island that had just been raised out of the sea by Luna? Impossible, he could not even apparate there to be there before Harry, not having been there before or being in possession of the co-ordinates. What on earth are you doing making Harry's animagus a stag? A useless animal for a man that has to fight. Despite this the story is very good.
2Specky ClarkeVoldemort was waiting in Arthur's tomb on an Island that had just been raised out of the sea by Luna? Impossible, he could not even apparate there to be there before Harry, not having been there before or being in possession of the co-ordinates. What on earth are you doing making Harry's animagus a stag? A useless animal for a man that has to fight. Despite this the story is very good.