
5/31/2008 c1 Karen
Well-written, but so freakin' sad...
Well-written, but so freakin' sad...
6/2/2005 c1 lisa
AW poor jackie! keep writing its awsome!
AW poor jackie! keep writing its awsome!
4/28/2005 c1
5Sundown
OH MY GOSH! so sweet, yet sad. Your characterisation was great...Karen was awesome! Your descriptions and EVERYTHING was awesome. The final three lines were beautiful. I love your work...poor Jack...keep writing honey :)

OH MY GOSH! so sweet, yet sad. Your characterisation was great...Karen was awesome! Your descriptions and EVERYTHING was awesome. The final three lines were beautiful. I love your work...poor Jack...keep writing honey :)
4/28/2005 c1
23MirrorKisses
Story is so ockin' my emoations right now, I hate cowlip for screwing up a perfectly good show but this is some good writing still, very emoational, very Jack-ish...great

Story is so ockin' my emoations right now, I hate cowlip for screwing up a perfectly good show but this is some good writing still, very emoational, very Jack-ish...great