
4/30/2005 c1 Janice
Very well written, change a few words to have clearer meaning
All in all very good
Very well written, change a few words to have clearer meaning
All in all very good
4/30/2005 c1 mari
Wow! good job can't wiat to read more!
Wow! good job can't wiat to read more!
4/30/2005 c1 fallenknight890
i really like this story and how its all "modern-day" now. good job. write more plz. -M.
i really like this story and how its all "modern-day" now. good job. write more plz. -M.