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4/4/2011 c2 angelwings8
Hee. "What about YOU and Cameron?" Classic.

Hot damn, is it obvious.
3/4/2008 c1 16Ellie White
This story was AWESOME! GREAT JOB!
5/15/2005 c9 1ILoveHPAndChocolate
Cool story. You should realy keep writing.
5/15/2005 c9 14jeevesandwooster
perfect ending. write more. that is all.
5/15/2005 c9 3JD01
I read it all- and I have one word for it: AMAZING!

It's simply AMAZING! You should definetely write more fanfics!
5/15/2005 c9 1summerbreeze247
Awesome ending! hehe loved the wilson as matchmaker...and u better write more house fanfics! id be verry disappointed if you didnt :)
5/14/2005 c9 1orangeangel
wow! they kissed, and then they are gonna talk about it over ice cream and wilson played matchmaker. Cool!
5/14/2005 c9 3gentlepeace
AW... You have made me so happy. I love this story it is so totally awesom!
5/12/2005 c8 14jeevesandwooster
OMG. Henry Higgins? THAT'S SO AMAZING. I love you. Seriously...

(gee...that sounded a little creepy. don't worry, not a stalker...

...though i bet all the stalkers say that...

...anyways...thank you for the my fair lady ref. it made me happy...toodlepip)
5/12/2005 c7 jeevesandwooster
bertram? of course i got it...did you see my name?
5/9/2005 c7 3Val'istar En' Alu
Ah a Jeeves and Wooster fan...I knew I liked you
5/5/2005 c6 6AshNight1422
I'm in suspense! plz plz plz more chapters!
5/5/2005 c1 15Laura Dugan
You have a good start here. I have a couple of suggestions:

- Some of your plot points are unclear. Cameron's quit, right? Then why would she be in her office at the hospital?

- I strongly suggest a beta reader. You have quite a few spelling and grammatical mistakes.

- And as always, work toward keeping characters IN character. Your House isn't too bad, Wilson is okay, but the ducklings could use a little more attention.

Like I said, it's a good start and a good attempt for a first fic. I hope you'll continue.
5/4/2005 c6 1orangeangel
please update soon, i wanna know what happens next oh and great chapter
5/4/2005 c6 3gentlepeace
Oh. The suspense builds, sort of. I cannot wait to find out what happens next.
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