7/22/2005 c1 1QueenOfHalf-BakedIdeas
I think that this is good, but it would be better off as a one-shot. Vegeta has already rejected Usagi's love and proved his undying devotion to Buruma, so there really isn't anywhere else you can take Usagi. Anyway, it had a solid ending, where there where no questions left to ask. But, I absolutely loved it! it was so sad, but kind of sweet too.

5/6/2005 c1 cardcaptor eternity
why were u in the hospital? i'm glad you're feeling better!

5/1/2005 c1 8JessicaD Tigerlily -Nerf
WOW, that was so sweet, very endearing. It was sad, yet made me smile... yet want to cry as well. The only ting I thought to b confusing is the constant flashbacks. If you were to make them more clear on whats a flash back and what is not then i would be better. try using bold or something to point out flashbacks. Also try adding nams to the "" when they talk, at least once and a while.

This is Nerf-or-Nothing as Miss Nerf - Pink Smurf

saying... good job and hope you make more soon.