
2/19/2014 c1 LadyAnnabellaIronBlood
A cliffhanger? I hope you add to itsome day it sounds great so far
A cliffhanger? I hope you add to itsome day it sounds great so far
2/27/2013 c1 The Amendable Snow Freak
Aww... Is the first boy dead? Or just grown up now? Post soon! This is great!
Aww... Is the first boy dead? Or just grown up now? Post soon! This is great!
11/25/2010 c1
35Nightshade's sydneylover150
I hope you continue this story one day, it looks like it has a lot of promise. Plus will Snape find his son?

I hope you continue this story one day, it looks like it has a lot of promise. Plus will Snape find his son?
3/9/2007 c1
4luvbooks
wow this story is really good. Please please write some more soon as i want to know what happens next.

wow this story is really good. Please please write some more soon as i want to know what happens next.
1/26/2006 c1
1SlytherinCreep
That was really good! Labyrinth and Harry Potter mixed, very original! This was interesting fr me to read, because Labyrinth is my favorite movie and Harry Potter is my favorite series. Update please!

That was really good! Labyrinth and Harry Potter mixed, very original! This was interesting fr me to read, because Labyrinth is my favorite movie and Harry Potter is my favorite series. Update please!
8/15/2005 c1 diamond004
OMG! THis is great! Please update SOON!
~diamond004
OMG! THis is great! Please update SOON!
~diamond004
7/31/2005 c1 unseen Watcher
HAH! I'd like to see Voldie (or even Dumbledore) try to manipulate Severus in THIS particular universe. Daddy would Not be happy! *cackles insanely* Anyway, I hope Harry (or whatever his name ends up being) is rescued Before he goes to school *hopeful look* Well, I like the premise of this fic. That is one family you do Not want to mess with! *grin* Please continue, and ignore any depressing details found a certain recently published book. ~_^
HAH! I'd like to see Voldie (or even Dumbledore) try to manipulate Severus in THIS particular universe. Daddy would Not be happy! *cackles insanely* Anyway, I hope Harry (or whatever his name ends up being) is rescued Before he goes to school *hopeful look* Well, I like the premise of this fic. That is one family you do Not want to mess with! *grin* Please continue, and ignore any depressing details found a certain recently published book. ~_^
7/1/2005 c1
1zafaran
This is an intriguing combination of universes for a cross-over, and you've got a very intriguing start. Please keep up the good work; I can't wait to find out what happens next. Zafaran
zafaran at fastmail. fm

This is an intriguing combination of universes for a cross-over, and you've got a very intriguing start. Please keep up the good work; I can't wait to find out what happens next. Zafaran
zafaran at fastmail. fm
6/15/2005 c1 Andy
Ok thats cool. I wouldn't mind ownin the two either. Great story keep it going
Ok thats cool. I wouldn't mind ownin the two either. Great story keep it going
5/4/2005 c1 fragonknight01
I think you have a concept here that could be developed.
You need to work on cleaning up oodles of errors though...
You might also want to work on transitioning from one idea to the next. Going from Sev straight to Harry without any clue as to why was a bit offputting.
Overall, I'd like to read more.
Arwen Rayne
I think you have a concept here that could be developed.
You need to work on cleaning up oodles of errors though...
You might also want to work on transitioning from one idea to the next. Going from Sev straight to Harry without any clue as to why was a bit offputting.
Overall, I'd like to read more.
Arwen Rayne