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6/10/2005 c4 kitty-kat7685
you surprised me there! i didnt think it would be Noin as there boss i was sure it was going to be Setsuna. oh well! i really loved this chapter be sure to update asap. oh i almost forgot i love the part when Heero took his anger out on the poor red button!one last quick queston, why does Heero have a bobby pin in his room? i thought that was funny for some odd reason, but hey bobby pins sure can come in handy! so update all your lovly storys asap! kk?
6/10/2005 c4 1Firenze
Great chapter, and I would like to see that picture. I never got around to asking about it. From the last chapter. yeah... keep up the good work. closet scene sounds like fun. what i would do to be rei... =^x^= mew!
6/10/2005 c4 6angelicmayuka
E the newest chapter! I seriously love this. It's probably my second favorite Rei/Heero fic (Need by Priscilla being first because it's longer :P) and when I saw my email that you'd updated, I squealed with happiness. I loved the way you have the other senshi incorperated in. It's awesome. I love how you had the handcuffs still on his wrist for him to forever remember his humility :P Good good stuff. If you ever need a beta-reader, lemme know! :D I'd gladly help out.
6/10/2005 c4 Rena H.M
It was short but I still enjoyed reading it. And Yes Rei and Hiro in the very small closet will be funny and cute.
6/10/2005 c4 4Princess Ren
YES! A post! I agree it's short but heck! I don't care! It's still a chapter and that what matters! The chapter was great! especially Heero's part! hehehe... He's so angry.. I wonder what he will do to get Rei! Make sure heero falls in love big time! hehehe... Never knew Heero was naughty... hehehe... Post soon! Keep up the good work! ^o^ And Spurs did won! Big lead they have... hehehe...
6/4/2005 c3 Typhoon99
very very nice style of writing, can't wait to read the next installment
5/27/2005 c3 Rena H.M
YAH! Update! GO REI! Thats My Girl! Kick Hiros bum! Mooahahaha
5/25/2005 c3 6angelicmayuka
O_O I think you're one of the best writers that ever EXISTED. I love the way the characters are written in this story, and all the details are awesome. I love it. XD You seriously rock. I think this is now one of my fave stories.
5/25/2005 c3 MariKris
ah! omg please update im so bored out of my mind! actually...im procrastinating on studying for finals. but still! Update! its been such a long time since ive read a sm/gw crossover, and this just ignited my interest again. UPDATE!
5/25/2005 c3 purplejunkie
I just wanted to say that I haven't been this anxious for an update (for any of your fics) since Kirika's Absence was on I love the feeling you give off in your fics and how you really take the time to develope a scene rather than say something like, "he kicks and she kicks and then he gets the upper hand but then she burns him all to heck and she wins."

Oh...and I haven't seen that picture...and I would like to. But anyway, keep it up and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for the great fic!
5/25/2005 c3 1Firenze
OMG OMG OMG! That was awesome! Go team Rei. :P I loved that chapter, it was so... perfect. I love your writing style. Its so complete. Ano, keep up the good work.
5/24/2005 c3 3Hoshiko Megami
Can you let me know what site that is? Anyways, update real soon!
5/24/2005 c3 2agoraphobia
i loved the chapter! go rei tricking heero like that lol! oh and i want to see your pic! do you think you could e-mail it to me! i love anything that has to do with rei/heero!
5/24/2005 c3 1trp0522
Nothing to be sorry about, I am just glad you got over your writer’s block. Besides it is said, “good things come to those that wait,” and this chapter is very good indeed.

Well this is going to get very interesting indeed as Heero suspects that Rei is “The Casablanca Killer” and stake out the offices of Jed Miyamoto. Kudos for Rei holding her own in combat and defeating the ‘perfect soldier’ with the application of soft power (seduction).

Harmless speculation time: The person who called Rei’s cell phone has to be Usagi. I can just see Rei checking her voicemail and Usagi’s voice springs to life. “Rei-chan! Rei-chan! Let me tell you how my date with went….” Usagi continues with her tale in a rapid fast pace until the voicemail cuts her off, (Usagi in her exuberance continues for another twenty minutes not realizing the phone line is now dead). ^_^

But seriously great job on both pictures on mediaminer. Love the expression on Rei eyes in the Rei/Youji picture but my favorite so far is the Rei/Heero picture. Once again great expression in the eyes and great job shading.

Congrats on the Spurs victory over the Sun on Game One and good luck tonight.
5/24/2005 c3 thescientist
well, that was well waited for. i liked that but i especially like heero. he's soo halirious in there...it almost makes me cry wishing duo and wufei had been there! ohh poor duo, he missed all the fun! and poor heero was just enjoying himself when rei had to ruin the fun! heh.

anyhoos, i think you managed it pretty well writing this chapter, keeping in mind heero's personality and the situation he's in.

well im gonna check the pic out and i want to say more stuff but im time constrained!

CIAO!
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