for Retribution5/18/2005 c2 
6angelicmayuka
mwahaha first an insanely early review and now a late one, aren't you just lucky? :P Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next because it's the major confrontation with Rei and Heero! ^^ yay. I'm excited to see what happens. Wait...I think I said that already. Dang, writing a review at two seperate hours confuses me. Anyway more soon I hope.
6angelicmayukamwahaha first an insanely early review and now a late one, aren't you just lucky? :P Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next because it's the major confrontation with Rei and Heero! ^^ yay. I'm excited to see what happens. Wait...I think I said that already. Dang, writing a review at two seperate hours confuses me. Anyway more soon I hope.
5/17/2005 c2 Wow
It's really good! Update soon!
It's really good! Update soon!
5/15/2005 c2 Rena H.M
OH SO GOOD! I can not wait to see what Rei is going to do next. You are a very good writer! I can not wait to read more.
OH SO GOOD! I can not wait to see what Rei is going to do next. You are a very good writer! I can not wait to read more.
5/15/2005 c2 1Firenze
wow, this was a great chapter. shows how cunning rei and heero are. cannot wait for the next chapter!
1Firenzewow, this was a great chapter. shows how cunning rei and heero are. cannot wait for the next chapter!
5/14/2005 c2 MariKris
hahah omg that was some funny stuff... wow this has really got my interest. update soon!
hahah omg that was some funny stuff... wow this has really got my interest. update soon!
5/14/2005 c2 thescientist
awee, i love jadeite so much though...ohwell, there will be more fun with him around and ooh, that last scene, it was steaming. i mean really, i never knew heero was such a pervert. haha, what duo would do if he knew heero had such a great chance and didn't take it! anyway, wonderfully done. very film noir to me, if ya know what i mean and seductive.
can't wait for the next chapters of this and your other fics.
awee, i love jadeite so much though...ohwell, there will be more fun with him around and ooh, that last scene, it was steaming. i mean really, i never knew heero was such a pervert. haha, what duo would do if he knew heero had such a great chance and didn't take it! anyway, wonderfully done. very film noir to me, if ya know what i mean and seductive.
can't wait for the next chapters of this and your other fics.
5/14/2005 c2 1trp0522
I found chapter 2 of Retribution is superbly well crafted installment that is witty, sexy and a delight to read. You defiantly have a winner on your hands, once again thank you for taking the time to write this fantastic story.
1trp0522I found chapter 2 of Retribution is superbly well crafted installment that is witty, sexy and a delight to read. You defiantly have a winner on your hands, once again thank you for taking the time to write this fantastic story.
5/13/2005 c2 4Princess Ren
Interesting! Interesting chapter indeed! I love it! It seems that this 'mission' Rei has would take a lot of time.. or not! Hmm... so what's next! And what's Rei gotta do! A Heero/rei confrontation... I can't wait for the next chapter! You better post soon! Keep up the good work! And DON'T EVEN DARE DELETE this story! It's one in a million... And It would kill us r4eaders if you just delete this! Well.. better post the next chapter! ^o^
4Princess RenInteresting! Interesting chapter indeed! I love it! It seems that this 'mission' Rei has would take a lot of time.. or not! Hmm... so what's next! And what's Rei gotta do! A Heero/rei confrontation... I can't wait for the next chapter! You better post soon! Keep up the good work! And DON'T EVEN DARE DELETE this story! It's one in a million... And It would kill us r4eaders if you just delete this! Well.. better post the next chapter! ^o^
5/13/2005 c2 2agoraphobia
i love it soo very much (lol) i like treize more than jade to. im so glad you made it jade not tre cause i hate to seem him die. i love the part when rei's like "you're going to rape me?" and heero smirked and thought that he could get her to drop the towle! for some reason i thought that was really funy coimg out of heero (LOL). hey i think you should have rei kick heeros ass just for the fun of it. (i love heero so dont think im doing it because i dont like him!) i just thought maybe he could be beat buy a girl for once and it will also show him he's not dealing with an amateur you know! (it will show him not to think such noughty thoughts lol)
2agoraphobiai love it soo very much (lol) i like treize more than jade to. im so glad you made it jade not tre cause i hate to seem him die. i love the part when rei's like "you're going to rape me?" and heero smirked and thought that he could get her to drop the towle! for some reason i thought that was really funy coimg out of heero (LOL). hey i think you should have rei kick heeros ass just for the fun of it. (i love heero so dont think im doing it because i dont like him!) i just thought maybe he could be beat buy a girl for once and it will also show him he's not dealing with an amateur you know! (it will show him not to think such noughty thoughts lol)
5/12/2005 c1 Najha
You should have put this story out sooner, it's good!
You should have put this story out sooner, it's good!
5/9/2005 c1 MariKris
there is just not enough rei/heero fics! this was a great start off, please update soon as i will be looking out for this!
there is just not enough rei/heero fics! this was a great start off, please update soon as i will be looking out for this!
5/6/2005 c1 6angelicmayuka
E. Ok first, I couldn't agree more with your pairing than anyone else. I'm a rabid Rei/Heero fan and seeing these fics make me sqeal.
Next, your story line kicks ASS. I love how you've portrayed Rei and such. She's very well written and described. I loved this chapter immensely, it's got lots of detail (which is always a plus) and the characters aren't OOC :D Which is an even bigger +
I can't wait for more and to see how this is going to go. :D
6angelicmayukaE. Ok first, I couldn't agree more with your pairing than anyone else. I'm a rabid Rei/Heero fan and seeing these fics make me sqeal.
Next, your story line kicks ASS. I love how you've portrayed Rei and such. She's very well written and described. I loved this chapter immensely, it's got lots of detail (which is always a plus) and the characters aren't OOC :D Which is an even bigger +
I can't wait for more and to see how this is going to go. :D
5/5/2005 c1 Rena H.M
I like how you started this story and how you ended the chapter. Very good. It makes me want to read more. I hope you keep writing it.
I like how you started this story and how you ended the chapter. Very good. It makes me want to read more. I hope you keep writing it.